Reviews for The Monster You Made
Shirosaki Kizuro chapter 1 . 10/15
Hooded figure, green eyes, shit eating grin, seems familiar
kirito emiya chapter 4 . 9/13
Update right now
Galacter chapter 3 . 8/9
Naruto. Goddamn it.
Galacter chapter 2 . 8/9
Uh no. This shit better die cause I don't tolerate a losing, weak and Kishimoto. Son of a bitch.
Cain The Bloody Fallen chapter 4 . 7/1
good this is a interesting story i'd hate for it to be discontinued or something like that.
Anonymous chapter 4 . 5/18
It's been over three and a half years since you last updated this story.
Guest chapter 3 . 5/18
Are Naruto and Dan operating alone, or do they have collaberators and comrades?
Guest chapter 1 . 3/12
Guest chapter 4 . 3/7
Dammit why did it have to stop on such a terrible cliffhanger T-T
ARSLOTHES chapter 4 . 3/5
Hope you update this again soon
Guest chapter 3 . 2/28
Please tell me you haven't abandoned this story. It's been over three years since you updated.
reptoholic chapter 3 . 12/16/2015
This story is awesome! I can't wait for more to come. I would suggest him taking the cores though, it defeats the purpose if he wants them all gone and then leaves the cores...

Love the story, keep up the amazing work!
reptoholic chapter 2 . 12/16/2015
Looks fucking amazing!
reptoholic chapter 1 . 12/16/2015
looks good, hope he gets a few gals(or chifuyu)
The Stig's Roleplaying Cousin chapter 3 . 10/15/2015
It's been over two fucking years you useless pile of shit.
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