Reviews for The Monster You Made
Guest chapter 4 . 5/29
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Shirosaki Kizuro chapter 1 . 10/15/2016
Hooded figure, green eyes, shit eating grin, seems familiar
kirito emiya chapter 4 . 9/13/2016
Update right now
Emperor-Aurora chapter 3 . 8/9/2016
Naruto. Goddamn it.
Emperor-Aurora chapter 2 . 8/9/2016
Uh no. This shit better die cause I don't tolerate a losing, weak and Kishimoto. Son of a bitch.
Kuroyasha Shinozaki chapter 4 . 7/1/2016
good this is a interesting story i'd hate for it to be discontinued or something like that.
Anonymous chapter 4 . 5/18/2016
It's been over three and a half years since you last updated this story.
Guest chapter 3 . 5/18/2016
Are Naruto and Dan operating alone, or do they have collaberators and comrades?
Guest chapter 1 . 3/12/2016
XD
Guest chapter 4 . 3/7/2016
Dammit why did it have to stop on such a terrible cliffhanger T-T
ARSLOTHES chapter 4 . 3/5/2016
Hope you update this again soon
Guest chapter 3 . 2/28/2016
Please tell me you haven't abandoned this story. It's been over three years since you updated.
reptoholic chapter 3 . 12/16/2015
This story is awesome! I can't wait for more to come. I would suggest him taking the cores though, it defeats the purpose if he wants them all gone and then leaves the cores...

Love the story, keep up the amazing work!
reptoholic chapter 2 . 12/16/2015
Looks fucking amazing!
reptoholic chapter 1 . 12/16/2015
looks good, hope he gets a few gals(or chifuyu)
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