|Reviews for The New Dominion|
| big mak chapter 11 . 8/11/2012
I can't wait to see how this tuns out
| big mak chapter 10 . 8/11/2012
This is a great story i hope there will be more
| Guest chapter 6 . 8/5/2012
what a rush' lots of action in here and powerful new enemy for the sgc.
| Guest chapter 5 . 8/4/2012
wow what a rush man. Informative story and heated warnings. The poor major way over her head. But these guys are way too powerful or so it seems... Anyway keep it up... I like the pace of each chapter so far...
| Guest chapter 4 . 8/4/2012
excellent chapter - entertaining, engaging and informative. Damn these order dudes are some powerful people. Liked the dance of ghe water - cool stuff
| Guest chapter 3 . 8/4/2012
thrilling...even sent chills down my spine...good tocuh with the pod's abilities and the look on Anubis' face (i thought they might be working for the system lords but anubis that was a nice touch too)...
| Guest chapter 2 . 8/4/2012
interesting development. Sword fights i like those they're cool. sound like fight of the ubermanns and bloody mysterious. Keep it up
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/2/2012
wow she left. I did not seee this coming. Hope she finds him
| josh148513 chapter 7 . 7/10/2012
Why are they so thick
| Dragon of Tassir chapter 2 . 7/8/2012
definetly powerful continuation. It is getting very interesting.
| Dragon of Tassir chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
apart from a few techical mistakes, I have to say wow what a start. It has potential.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
who's the mystery guy? cool super powers
| josh148513 chapter 4 . 6/28/2012
Why's he running
Why hasn't she called the boss yet
Love ur work
| JACarter chapter 3 . 6/23/2012
I love it
| big mak chapter 2 . 6/19/2012
coool i can't wait for more