|Reviews for The Space Between|
| Justagirlfangirling chapter 15 . 12/14/2016
i read this story so fast and omg it was so good! i loved your writing and the way you so accurately wrote all the characters! i wish you could write a sequel for this story for us to see how did their new chapter started and ended. Thank you
| Guest chapter 15 . 9/18/2016
| BarcaB chapter 15 . 9/14/2016
Thank you! The way you've written this story I can imagine their future and grouch your eyes and it looks great, so thanks for the imagery, a very enjoyable read!
| jkate22 chapter 15 . 6/19/2016
Beautiful story! Loved it!
| fancynewwhatevr chapter 15 . 6/15/2016
WOW. I am late to the party, but this story is so incredible. You captured Jane and Maura's characterization beautifully and made them so believable. The chapters where they were captured were by far my favorite. I could feel the intensity, and the dialogue and inner monologues between Jane and Maura in the car were absolutely amazing. Not to mention the added hilarity of Maura driving their captors insane by rambling off facts - so realistic. Anyway, just wanted to say thank you for this story, it brought me much joy. :)
| Guest chapter 15 . 4/17/2016
great story. loved it.
| Guest chapter 15 . 2/2/2016
I loved this story from beginning to end. I really liked your characterization of Jane and Maura. Great job!
| Daryl chapter 15 . 1/28/2016
loved reading this story
| Joan chapter 15 . 1/24/2016
Loved this just as much the second time around.
| Shorty83 chapter 5 . 1/7/2016
This chapter brought tears to my eyes and then by the end a really big smile. Beautiful.
| KanucksPen chapter 15 . 10/31/2015
A lovely read, thank you. You've captured the essence of the characters well, allowing them to continue in the direction the writers keep setting up, but never allow them to pursue. Very heartfelt and enjoyable.
I also found the growing one-shot format amusing, and appreciated your involving your audience. If I'd been around during your original writing I'd have been strongly supporting a M rating.
And just because I have to, let me say that I wish there were some way of forcing negative reviewers (like the guest below complaining about cliches) to identify themselves. While I welcome constructive criticism, I really don't understand the sense of entitlement displayed by those who don't write, don't even bother to sign up, but complain that their free read didn't meet their high expectations. It reminds me of the words of Tyne Daly: "A critic is someone who never actually goes to the battle, yet who afterwards comes out shooting the wounded."
| Mumas47 chapter 7 . 10/19/2015
I love the way you portray Jane and Maura in this chapter their sense of humour and the loveable banter and constant teasing - brava!
| Jennifer B Taylor chapter 15 . 10/3/2015
I just found this and read the entire story in one sitting. Such a wonderful way to wrap up the fracking episode and weave the progression of Jane & Maura's relationship into natural evolution. I loved the pace you used and how realistic your characterization were. I also really appreciated how you slowed down the pace of their physical relationship based on their injuries.
Absolutely fantastic job! Thanks for postingl
| Bit's Bit chapter 15 . 9/30/2015
Thank you for this story. Enjoyed Maura and Jane's adventures. :)
| Vanilla chapter 4 . 9/3/2015
First time reading this fic in 2015, i've only reached chapter four and i've already found it to be more engaging and entertaining than the mess the script writers left us with. Hopefully the team will wise up and have you write for them (or borrow some of this awesome fic) so they can get finally have a solid and sensible show with this new big (reset button) story in the current story arc.
Thank you for sharing this. :)