Reviews for The Space Between
Mag Guarino chapter 15 . 7/10
This was a REALLY good story. I enjoy your style of writing. P.S. Goonies is one of my fave movies too. I guess Jane and I have that in common too. Bra-vo!
Louise Hess chapter 15 . 6/20
Fantastic - thanks for writing and sharing
Guest chapter 15 . 6/13
I enjoyed your story. Loved the humour.
rookie802 chapter 15 . 2/29
Good story
Guest chapter 15 . 7/12/2023
Maura spouting scientific stuff and Jane cutting to the chase ... they are perfect for each other!
This was an awesome story.
Any chance for a sequel?
Guest chapter 14 . 7/12/2023
Thank you- you write these two so well. I chuckle throughout almost every interaction between Jane and Maura - I love it. Angela's relationship with Maura is also something I love. It was sweet when she listened to jane and Maura in the tub and knew they are perfect for each other. I like stories like this where all the main characters are included in a positive way like one big family even if some, like Maura's parents, are a little formal. That will change.
Guest chapter 13 . 7/12/2023
Maura and her dad finally talking was sweet.
Guest chapter 12 . 7/12/2023
Jane keep her opinions to herself, fat chance. I always love Jane and Maura in the bathtub.
Guest chapter 7 . 7/11/2023
I could listen to jane and Maura all day. When she was trying to explain to Frankie what their experiment was waa very cute. As was Jane explaining to Frankie that Maura really meant they would play scrabble all night - it wasn't a secret code.
Guest chapter 6 . 7/11/2023
Jane telling Maura she can't correct her grammar when they go all the way - very funny. I love their banter even when they're being sexy.
Guest chapter 5 . 7/11/2023
I'm telling you, you know how to write the humor between these two. It's my kind of story that includes humor, danger, and little bit of sexy.
Guest chapter 4 . 7/11/2023
So many things about this chapter make me laugh and enjoy it so much: Maura oblivious to Jane's adolescent humor, Maura knowing Jane more in two years than Angela in a lifetime, Jane's jealousy over Tommy and Maura, and everyone else knowing Jane is jealous even if she didn't admit it out loud.
Well done!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/10/2023
Very glad it's not a one-shot! I love the start.
Anonymous chapter 4 . 3/19/2023
Jane is so childish.
Guest chapter 7 . 7/8/2022
Frankie: Go enjoy your scrabble game
Jane: it's Maura. That's not a code word. She literally wants to play Scrabble. All night long.

Jane: Sure you're not in the mood for some wheat sperm fish?
Maura: you are not coming home with me if you say that again.

I really enjoy the banter between these two. I loved it on these show and I love it when writers (like you) can capture it so well!
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