I have enjoyed this story from start to now, looking forward to the rest.

OMG thank God I just started reading this fic and I get to read a few more chapters because I coulndt handle that cliffhanger wow

"Oh for crying out loud," Jane shuts Maura up with a kiss Epic!

I love Frankie "Are you kidding me? It was watching Tommy flirt with you that made me uncomfortable." He chuckled. "If Jane ever rides you too hard - " he stopped, his face reddening as he coughed into his hand. "I mean – what I meant was – " Maura suppressed a chuckle as he cleared his throat, finally opting to start over. "If Jane ever teases you too much or gets too annoying, just say these words: Sister Winifred Callaghan. It will stop her cold."

I loved that whole part with these characters.

Maura saying "please not another sandwich" omg lol and Jane saying "How lovely," Jane replied with an exaggerated smile. "Sorry, but this one's on a wheat sperm - excuse me - wheat germ-free diet."

I loved it! The sibling rivalry is fun to read.

I liked reading at the end of Ch 1 that it was a one-shot and I had already seen there were 12 chapters. It means it's a good story and I'm lucky to have found it.

Just found this story it's amazing, I love it!

Head over heels in love with this story. Have I mentioned how fantastic a writer you are lately? Because sweet lord you're amazing. So true to the characters. This should seriously be a movie. Can not wait for more!

Good as usual!

I love it! I would have been reviewing all the others chapters but my alert thing went on the fritz. It's fixed now and I'm looking forward to more of this.

Jane's eyes widened. "Good god, I feel sorry for your children. They're never going to get away with anything."

Jane looked over at her, amused, her fears slipping momentarily away. "How do you always make me laugh you're not even funny"

man quotes like this ugh. True to the characters indeed. I loved how Jane swept Maura off her feet and Maura trying explain where that slogan came from and Jane is all like "Nooooo"

RONDDDOOOOOO OMG BAHAHAHAHA that Strawberry and Banana Split line had me literally lmao. That was great bringing Rondo in.

Aw man, I am so excited for parental interactions. I hope Jane gets all pitbull scary on them! And Mara and her crutch, and jane waiting for her to press the elevator button. Jeez, melt my heart. Mama Rizzoli! the captain of the ship in every universe! I am totally in love with everything about your stories! post again soon!

There are just no words to describe how good, how perfect, this chapter was. Everything...Maura and Jane leaving the hospital, Maura scolding Jane and Tommy as they bickered in the car, Mama R back at the house fussing over them, the quiet conversation between our girls in the kitchen, and in the bathtub. Even Mama R eavesdropping was incredibly sweet.
And can I tell you, the image of Mama R coming out of the house when the car pulled up...I smiled SO BIG picturing her as one of those wacky giant flailing arms blow up dolls!

You have simply outdone yourself.
Thank you for this story. :)

Omg this chapter was great.

When Tommy came and brought the cheese steaks I was laughing at Maura reaction. And the conversation between Tommy and Jane just genius. That played in my head like if I was watching the show.

The "I love you" was perfect and then Maura correcting Jane in that serious situation just made me giggle. That is so Maura :-)

"One woman is complicated enough, but two?"
Momma rizzoli was just perfect

So glad Maura and Jane are out of the hospital! Loved the bath! I am really enjoying this story!

Just sat and read this all in one go :) It's beautifully written and totally captivating! I love how you've portrayed Jane and Maura's changing relationship, from 'breast' friends to the brilliant couple that they are :) Can't wait to read more!

Loved this chapter! It's so cute! D Can't wait until the next one!