I'm in love with your writing. Not only is it super cute/sweet, it's also super funny. More than once you had me giggling to myself (two scoops!). Thanks so much for writing and posting! Can't wait to keep reading :)

Gahh so cute! I'm so glad this didn't stay a one shot :) I can't wait to hear how they finally confess their feelings!

great story! I'd take it over canon anytime. loved the way everything progressed and you certainly know how to write action and drama, very exciting the whole kidnapping ordeal. a thoroughly enjoyable read, thank you.

This was UH-MAZING! I have loved it very much, thank you so much for sharing this amazing story with us :-)

This was a great story!

Am really likin this lil story of urs! I love the film a league of their own! N I love ol rhonda! She gives me chuckles! :)

Wow what a great story I couldn't put it down. And the Goonies part was great I watched that 100 times as a kid.

Doesn't matter how many times I read this, it's always one of those I absolutely adore. The story flows so well and has an excellent blend of action and romance. Love it!

Well done!

That conversation with Rondo cracked me up!

wat a story such a mixture with a lovely ending ty

I hadn't heard of Jessie Ware before, but goddamn that song was amazing! I will sure be checking out more of her stuff. And that song really fit Jane and Maura I think.
I really like the ending to this, how both their families are getting on well and everyone's happy and in a good place. It's been one hell of a journey.

Awwww. The part with Maura and her dad. And then Constance inviting all the Rizzoli clan to their Chateau. I like where this is headed.

I read some chapters last night before I went to bed and as soon as I got to work I had the fanfiction window open to read more. So since i'm online again I felt I should review, although you're probably fed up of my name popping up in your inbox as I review this while reading. Very intense with the hijack and the factory explosion. And of course Angela would need to be there, to protect "her girls" :-) She's always thought of Maura as part of the family. And why not huh? Nice to see Tommy's gentle side too. Only a few chapters left for me now, i'll be sad to see it end. But excited to read other fanfics you have as they're really good and you capture the characters of everyone so amazing. Even the dialog is spot on.

Ride you too hard? Oh good lord. Your one liners are priceless. And wheat sperm free diets, ahahah! And the androgynous comment. Probably I spelt that wrong, but who cares. Sorry for all the reviews, but I always write a review for each chapter I read so I can remind myself where I got to, and your story has taken me away from work into a nice little alternative world for a few hours. So thanks for that. God then I got to the end. I knew when she approached the car that there was something up. I have goosebumps. But I can't read the next chapter now because I need to go to the toilet, and go home. So until later I will just need to cross my fingers that Maura is okay.