Reviews for The Space Between |
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![]() ![]() ![]() wow. ok that formed a tear. it a good story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Are you sure you don't want to make this a two shot? I for one would really like to be privy to the conversation they are going to have the next day. Either way this was a great fic. I loved Jane's conversation with her mother. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It could so totally be more than a one-shot! I love it though :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've been waiting for a story to cover this - and it was brilliant. Thank you! pacing, characterisation, everything was spot on. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice! That was a great story, and the idea that Jane needs to go through a real trauma to realise how she feels is perfect. You captured jane and Angela's personalities perfectly! I loved it! x |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great work - your characterisations were perfect, especially Jane and her sarcasm! Shame it is only a one shot but it definitely fills the gap! :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I would love to read more of this if maybe you were to decide it wasn't a one shot... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome! Very well-written. The characters were spot on and this was a perfect bridge between the two scenes in the show where Korsak shows up and then Jane and Tommy are helping Maura into the house. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful! The characters were spot on! (even Rhonda :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a sweet, sweet fic. But really loved: '"This isn't me," she replied. "This is my leg smiling at you."' |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwww, this was a great addition to this ep. It was intense and I could feel all of Jane's emotions. I love how strong her love is for Maura and vice versa. Great oneshot. : ) |
![]() ![]() Loved it, what a great moment to turn into an ah-Hah moment for Jane. Well written characterizations of our girls as well, bravo. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Terrific! Really had my attention and filled in the gap quite nicely. If that was only break time, I can't even fathom how quickly you write. And now I'm off to seek out more of your work ... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah..this was so good. I really wanted to know more of what happened that night on the show, but they just skipped straight to her coming home. You've written it as I would have imagined things to happen. I love Mama Rizzoli. She's such a great character in the show. The bribery for a hug was my favourite. You've portrayed them all brilliantly. Nicely written. Thanks for sharing your talent with us x |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am impress that you wrote this during your lunch. It is well organized and developed. It is a believable plot and it kept my whole interest as I read it. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Keep up the writing. |