Reviews for The Space Between
wolfamodais chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
wow. ok that formed a tear. it a good story.
afret2010 chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
Are you sure you don't want to make this a two shot? I for one would really like to be privy to the conversation they are going to have the next day.

Either way this was a great fic. I loved Jane's conversation with her mother.
Satan-wears-prada chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
It could so totally be more than a one-shot! I love it though :D
GoTeam chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
I've been waiting for a story to cover this - and it was brilliant. Thank you! pacing, characterisation, everything was spot on.
frogface-rizzoli chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
Nice! That was a great story, and the idea that Jane needs to go through a real trauma to realise how she feels is perfect. You captured jane and Angela's personalities perfectly! I loved it! x
Rainbow345uk chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
Great work - your characterisations were perfect, especially Jane and her sarcasm! Shame it is only a one shot but it definitely fills the gap! :-)
ashikinz chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
I would love to read more of this if maybe you were to decide it wasn't a one shot...
1wittykitty chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
Awesome! Very well-written. The characters were spot on and this was a perfect bridge between the two scenes in the show where Korsak shows up and then Jane and Tommy are helping Maura into the house.
GratiaPlena chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
Beautiful! The characters were spot on! (even Rhonda :-)
slashpony chapter 1 . 6/15/2012
What a sweet, sweet fic. But really loved: '"This isn't me," she replied. "This is my leg smiling at you."'
stargaze29 chapter 1 . 6/15/2012
Awwww, this was a great addition to this ep. It was intense and I could feel all of Jane's emotions. I love how strong her love is for Maura and vice versa. Great oneshot. : )
Redwolf chapter 1 . 6/15/2012
Loved it, what a great moment to turn into an ah-Hah moment for Jane. Well written characterizations of our girls as well, bravo.
TheQueenOfBrazil chapter 1 . 6/15/2012
Terrific! Really had my attention and filled in the gap quite nicely. If that was only break time, I can't even fathom how quickly you write. And now I'm off to seek out more of your work ...
Fallen austin chapter 1 . 6/15/2012
Ah..this was so good. I really wanted to know more of what happened that night on the show, but they just skipped straight to her coming home. You've written it as I would have imagined things to happen.

I love Mama Rizzoli. She's such a great character in the show. The bribery for a hug was my favourite.

You've portrayed them all brilliantly. Nicely written. Thanks for sharing your talent with us x
Kyregent chapter 1 . 6/15/2012
I am impress that you wrote this during your lunch. It is well organized and developed. It is a believable plot and it kept my whole interest as I read it. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Keep up the writing.
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