Reviews for I made a promise to a lady
gabelou1991 chapter 13 . 6/3/2017
J'aime bien ton histoire.
gabelou1991 chapter 11 . 6/2/2017
Je ne suis pas d'accord dans ton commentaire sur Spike, tu dit que son démon est apparu dans seing red mais je pense que c'est plus l'homme blessé qui est apparu et on sait tous quand un homme est blessé émotionnellement il peut faire des choses grave.
brendafay chapter 13 . 5/22/2017
more please
ScarletDrizzle chapter 8 . 4/12/2017
God, that was mindblowing. Having someone rewrite/add OMWF songs was so far beyond my expectations for BtVS fanfics, and on top of that to rewrite them WELL! God, that was genius. Purely amazing. I especially loved Willow's version of Under Your Spell, and the new Walk Through The Fire. But honestly, ALL of them were fantastic. Lyrically perfect for the new story while staying true to the original songs. I'm going to stop gushing now because I think you get the point. But really, superbly done!
Meghan1313 chapter 8 . 1/13/2017
AAAAAGGGGGHHHH no curtains closing on a kiss? The agony!
Meghan1313 chapter 4 . 1/13/2017
Thank you, thank you, THANK you for referencing Pike from the pre-series BtVS movie! I always liked him. :)
Guest chapter 13 . 10/25/2016
I hope you come back to finish this story, along with "A Witch Comes to Sunnydale". They both are very good stories, and you are a very good writer.
Guest chapter 13 . 10/22/2016
this is a good story
Jhill88 chapter 13 . 1/29/2016
I know this is an older story, but I really hope you update this one day. I love the little spins that you put on the show.
all forms of fluff chapter 13 . 6/25/2015
I'm not sure I like this story. 13 chapters in and I am still waiting for the story to start, for something beside the cosmetics of it to alter slightly. Its not that I don't like the small changes. I think there are brilliantly done, the musical section was actually kind of fun to read. I even played the songs in the background to get that feel that it was actually singing. For the most part you words lined up with the music. Other then that You havn't changed much. The actions are still the same, the diologe is slighly different but the results are the same. And while you have given reasons for the sameness that dosn't change that the same things are happeneing. My favorite parts is when you go outise of the cannon material. The phone call with Cordilla, Skip with the Powers, the Slayer white room. They were really adding to the story. but they are few and far between. The only way I can see the reason for this sameness would be for a major change some time after the time the wish was made. If you had another scean with Skip or the Oricals being frustraited at have to keep the changes to the world would have produced from happening by sending Buffy the dreams and feelings of her altered self.

I don't want you to think that I am just spitting on this story. It is a decently told story, however its still the same story as the show so far and whild Spike has altered somethings its not enough to keep intrest over long pierds between updates. If you do decide to update I hope that you get Spike and Dawn in a scean again. With him bailing to look for that dream stone the two of them havent gotten allot of time to themselves. The training sesion, another scean that I enjoyed, was really the only time they had to bond on screan. I am assuming that they still get together. The scean where she approched him after the buring dance proved that she was still confortable to be in his presence. Over all this story isn't so bad. It just seems like its just getting its legs under it. I hope the action or devergent sceans began to happen more rapidly as we approch the confrotation with the Trio. Thank you for sharing this story. Untill next time keep having fun writing and you will continue to have fans reading. Thanks again for the story.
nrdhrd3 chapter 13 . 2/1/2014
Please for the love of God finish this story!
randyzoopurple chapter 13 . 12/26/2013
silverdragon0315 chapter 13 . 5/15/2013
love this fic well written
HikariYamino chapter 13 . 4/21/2013
spikefan0001 chapter 13 . 4/8/2013
Great story and i hope you will update soon:)
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