|Reviews for Shinigami's Revenge|
| LyricoJ chapter 16 . 12/11/2013
Wow, it was very different.. i really like how raito transformex into shinigami.. could imagined it...kkk
| Abigail H Lee chapter 3 . 12/10/2013
Argh, that's sick! Kill the bastard right now!
| hoot hoot owls chapter 16 . 10/9/2013
I loved it. It was cute and sometimes made me sad but most of the time I was just happy.
| sepphire chapter 16 . 9/18/2013
An original story, i'd really enjoyed it. :)
| winter soul chapter 16 . 8/26/2013
u know u could have done a sequel with an 3nding like this
| JIMIRMA chapter 16 . 7/19/2013
Unique. Absolutely loved the fact that Light was the good guy. Nice work on the living Shinigami thing.
| KkChibiChop chapter 16 . 6/13/2013
I loved the different take on this story. I will admit the very graphic rape scene had me cringing so I kind of just tried to skim over that a bit. I did like the whole story and I couldn't stop reading once I started. I had that one image of Raito in mind where he has a scythe and bone like wings. I liked Raito as a shinigami rather than Kira. I loved his and Ryuk's relationship, it was quite sweet. Overall, nice story! XD
| Reader-anonymous-writer chapter 16 . 1/25/2013
As well, the brunette teenager knew one important fact that Ryuuzaki didn't: he knew who Kira was. The only problem was finding him.
So, is Raito hunting for Kira?
It was his job as a shinigami to kill those who were already dying, to usher them to the afterlife.
Takeshi Inoue, it's not love.
The calm that had frozen his heart had melted into a pool of cold water in his stomach. He worked hard to keep his breath steady, trying to hide the fear.
Raito knows of Kira's plans for him.
It feels like a shame to waste all those late night hours with you traveling back and forth between here and your home." "You want me to move here?" Raito asked, finishing L's idea for him.
Not a bad idea. It will be difficult for Kira to assault Raito.
In a situation such as the one he was currently in, having the scythe with him would have certainly been welcome.
Can you ask Ryuk to bring it here?
What is curious is the phenomenon that follows. If a Death God deems the punishment to be unjust, the tortured soul is given a choice: remain in their sad life or take up the Scythe.
How did L get such a good source of information?
Now, I need you to find and stick close to him. He's gotten involved with the task force designed to bring me down and I don't want him getting hurt in the process.
Darn, darn, darn. How can Light stop her? I don't want L to die.
Raito drew in a sharp breath as he read them. "Death comes swift to those who are lucky. Death waits for those who are lucky."
'Takeshi knows that I'm a human shinigami,' he thought, reaching forward to trace the words with his finger. 'These tapes aren't for L or the task force. They're for me. He's trying to contact me.'
A human shinigami...
"Have you ever read Robert Browning, Raito-kun?" L asked suddenly. Shocked out of his thoughts by the deep voice, Raito turned to the dark detective and shook his head. "No," he lied.
You lie about everything connected to Kira. L will trace your connections to Kira, to Takeshi.
Sticky notes are a good idea.
He would walk Sayu back to the house, do whatever his mother asked, and sneak away to the address Ryuk had given him.
The address that was written out was also unknown to L, a feat considering that he knew the addresses of every officer on the force, even those he hadn't worked with.
Amused. Raito was careless with the note?
It was Takeshi, not Raito, that he had been looking for. "Do you know where Takeshi-kun lives?" L asked.
Why does Rem protect Takeshi? Why? She knows that he will not make Misa-Misa happy.
He could nearly hear the sound of glass breaking and falling to the floor. Nothing mattered anymore, expect Takeshi's death. Even Raito's future had to take a back seat. Even L had to.
"Shinigami aren't supposed to kill people unless their time has come! Death comes swift to those who are lucky! Death waits for those who are lucky!"
I was worried about this. I was.
Misa was also a Kira. She didn't deserve to die at Raito's hand, but she wasn't completely innocent.
Good day, good night, and good luck, L, Light, Raito, Ryuk, Ryuuzaki, Watari.
| Lady Ambika chapter 16 . 1/20/2013
That was beautiful, intense and addictive.
Very detailed on the actions, something that I simply love in a fanfic. Not entirely OOC, something rare to find these days, good plot and even being AU, it doesn't run too far off the context of DN.
I loved every word.
| BlaRiix chapter 13 . 1/8/2013
I guess both L and Light have crazy red-eyed raven haired stalkers xD
| LightNote19 chapter 16 . 1/4/2013
O.O best ever
| lil joker 1989 chapter 16 . 12/25/2012
This was a really great story I loved the plot and everything :)
| c-leeqa chapter 16 . 12/20/2012
| Darifica chapter 16 . 11/29/2012
Whoop, finished! I loved this!
I'd like to start with the slight critisism I have to give (though I feel unworthy to criticize this amazing writing xD)
There was one thing which bugged me.. I don't know, but it seems odd that Light said something about not having seen Takeshi since graduation.. does that mean Light graduated high school a year before this story takes place or something? Can't be middle school if they went to the same high school o.o Dunno, just seemed strange to me. I know it's just an unimportant detail, but I get picky sometimes xD
Other than that, I couldn't help feeling that the romance between L and Light was.. well, rushed, because it was only in the last two chapters that their seemingly sudden feelings were truly shown. For the majority of the story, it didn't feel like I was reading a story with LxLight pairing. I can understand taking it slowly, but it's just.. there were hardly any hints or anything of them developing romantic feelings for each other (or if there were, it must be me who missed them all), which is why I say they seemed to appear out of nowhere. Well, it might have to do with the length of the story and it's definitely not enough to ruin it, it just felt a little unnatural to me is all :P
Spelling errors were minimal, so no complaints there.
Anyways, enough bitching. The story seemed to flow very well, felt quite realistic despite the supernatural elements. L and Light were both in character (or Light as much as he could be taking the trauma into consideration), Takeshi was.. yeah xD you really succeeded well in making me despise that bastard.
Overall, an amazing story which captivated me. It was a very addictive, fun read :D
| UltimateNinjaOfDoom chapter 16 . 11/24/2012
cool story loved it