Reviews for A Fathers Sin rewrite
YuseiStardust18 chapter 1 . 1/13
KaiFudo, I'm asking for your permission to write A Father's Sin 2. Can I write it? Please?
Kurisu Fudo chapter 3 . 9/15/2016
Love the story! BTW, rally's a girl.
hikora chapter 13 . 6/24/2015
Irara will SO take after her mommy as a mechanic. The nerve of Yusei's father, using his own son in a experiment. It's a good thing that everything ended well.
Maria Stars chapter 13 . 10/14/2014
Well, this explains why the story wasn't updated... Thank you for taking it and finishing it. I like the way you ended it.
Rain of the Forest chapter 5 . 2/25/2014
Gate to Dreams chapter 13 . 1/22/2014
Purplehiphippo chapter 13 . 12/30/2013
Awwwwwww, the ending is so fluffy and cute
KitsunexNoxShi chapter 13 . 11/30/2013
Proposal scenes are the best kind of fluff out there! X3
Sylvia Scarlett chapter 13 . 4/29/2013
I love this story every time I read it
loveinuyashatoshiro chapter 13 . 2/21/2013
loves loves loves loves loves loves loves loves loves loves loves
YuseiFudo chapter 13 . 1/30/2013
I loved this story so much! Im sure Jack will think its adorable as well. And the funny thing is Jack says i am good with my hands, if ya know what i mean! I have fix our bikes everyday cause of his wrecklessness... and other things.
Guest chapter 9 . 1/4/2013
Carly x Crow? That completely disgusts me. Also, how would Angela know Yuusei was pregnant? I know he's showing and all but wouldn't it be hidden by Jack?
Guest chapter 13 . 1/4/2013
Nov.Rain chapter 1 . 11/20/2012
I like the beginning
feamlenaruto chapter 1 . 10/19/2012
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