Reviews for Dodge and Burn |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Poor misguided Edward. Great story. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my goodness...amazing, great story. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm looking forward to the journey. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() Very intriguing...I'm looking forward to more. |
![]() ![]() Well done. Unique |
![]() ![]() Hope for we odd ducks? |
![]() ![]() Delightfully quirky. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm so sad for them breaking up. I know B is so full of excitement and wonder in how she lives. I hope she is okay going on these sudden spur of the moment trips. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So now Bella has to protect her heart from him because she's scared Edward might just walk out on her again, but Edward didn't get to be angry and protect his heart when Bella's threat of leaving him in a much more permanent way, is just sitting on her mantle. I don't like the hypocrisy of this situation. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm so confused. Jasper can get pissed at Edward for threatening to off himself after he's had a friend who did it and that's perfectly normal, but Edward gets pissed at Bella for doing the same after he lost his father that way, and he's made out to be the bad guy and irrational? This just really doesn't sit well with me and I honestly feel like Edward was completely justified to walk away. Who wants to be in a relationship where you know the person has this type of contingency plan and can just decide to kill herself because she forgot something one day. We lost my grandmother to Alzheimer's and I can honestly say that if I new of a plan like this I would have had her committed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful, beautiful story. The most original I think I've ever read in the three years I've been an avid reader of fanfiction. Perfect, mature characters with real world problems. I love it and I'm a fan for life! I can't wait to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have to tell you that I don't review often, because I don't seem to have a way with words as you wonderful writers do, but I must tell you that this story was AMAZING! Thank you so much for the effort and time you put into this piece. It was wonderful and I'm sure I'll reread it again someday! |
![]() ![]() ![]() We are delighted to feature your story in FicStock Friday; a fandom celebration, at the FicSisters. Thanks to RoseArcadia! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, this is such a hard chapter. I can understand both povs. |
![]() ![]() I love this story...it's deep compelling and very well written-great characters. Plus the scene where the last couple of chapters are hilarious. It'd make a great film! |