Reviews for Dodge and Burn |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I saw a recomendation for this fic on a twlight community and started to read. I love it to the start and final, thanks so much for your care and amazing fic. I hope you can write more fics to us. |
![]() ![]() Such a sweet story. Great job. |
![]() ![]() Hahaha! I knew Bella wouldn't kill herself so that didn't worry me, tho chapter was a comedy of errors, but Leo going all Darth Vader and saying he is Jake's father? Well I just can't stop laughing, I am half expecting for Jake to yell out noooo, in the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() Lauren does not deserve a great guy like Leo or Edward! I want her to end up with a con artist who steals all her money and leaves her poor and having to move in with her parents! |
![]() ![]() From your description Of Bella, she is the exact image of Sofia Vergara, while Lauren's looks remind me of Paris Hilton ( yuck), either way there is no competition, Bella is more gorgeous. |
![]() ![]() This chapter makes me want to go back to Italy! |
![]() ![]() I like Leo. And a huge part of me wants Bella to be a polygamist and have two husbands. |
![]() ![]() That ramps waitress knew Edward was with Bella, and yet she still put the moves on him?! And of course he didn't tell Bella. She wouldn't do anything to the waitress because she is classy, but I hope the whore tries to hit on a married man, and the wife beats the crap out of the tramp. |
![]() ![]() I understand, to an extent, her being scared he'll leave her, again... But he didn't leave her bc things got tough or he wasn't sure about her, he left her bc she planned to kill herself at some point in her life. Why would someone want to be w someone when they planned that? I know anything could happen but this is planned. It's a little different. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful conclusion |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh man, this chapter made me laugh so hard! I've loved this story, despite some roller coaster moments :) Thanks for sharing this beautiful work! |
![]() ![]() Why has this been about her choice? He left her and was super mean, screw this Edward he only thinks with his dick now there in Italy! This is not how i wanted this trip to go, none of it! I love a slow burn but stupid actions from adults their ages is too much. Adulting is hard but come on! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm rereading this for the first time since you've completed this story! And my god! I love this story more than before. It was such a treat reading this without having to wait for the updates. Loved the way you wrote Bella and Edward and their journey to love! Thank you :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() My Dad got it first but he was 84. It was still bad. When he didn't know who I was. But I found out was that if we talked about the past, he remembered things and he felt less pressure, me too. My Mod started showing signs when my Dad got sick and later died. They died 6 months apart in 2004. One of the hardest years of my life. Then in 2006 our house burned down and many more tragedies. I hope Bella doesn't have it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just love the way you write. You writing is just beautiful! This is my favorite Bella and I'm loving the changes in Edward! He is softer and loving. He is honest and strong. He is capable again! Thx so much for writing luv, I really need the escape! |