Oh Shit, I have to read on right now! ;)

It's her son, right? God I hope so!

I'm so happy that Edward isn't depressed anymore! He deserves this happiness!

I know it's been Quite a long time since you wrote this, but I'm sorry you were having a bad time at the time. This is a very bad time for me. My husband and I are both bedridden from severe health issues. Your story has lifted me up though, so thanks so much for that Abbie. If you ever need someone to talk to, I'm not going anywhere sweetie! I pray your life is better...
You are an amazing writer luv. So amazing, don't forget that because it come from your insides and that must be a beautiful place.

Did he sign the papers? God I hope so. What was so great about Lauren anyway? I mean she had an affair and left him. I know how bad it hurts believe me I do, but it's time to go on now, he has a new life to start

Oh poor Edward, why can't he let Lauren go. She doesn't want him. I'm so sorry he still hurts so bad for her. He needs Bella damn it. I bet she can save his heart and his body!

Oh man, he needs to write her a letter and explain that his wife is waiting for him to sign the divorce papers!

it was an amazing journey and should be published for everyone to share

I think she is exacting some sort of punishment nut all is guilty of is never wanting to let her go

yay

I understand both sides

finally

your choice of illnesses hit home mu nany brother age 53 has Parkinsons and my sister 56 has early onset Alheimers but I still love this story

been a while since I have read your work but I am fascinated by this

J'ai beaucoup aimé cette histoire. Le thème est original et bien sûr, les héros sont attachants. Un seul bémol: Je ne lis pas l'anglais facilement et j'ai donc découvert cette fanfiction dans une traduction très rudimentaire. Je serais très heureuse de relire "Dodge and burn" dans un bon français. J'encourage l'auteur à faire éditer ce texte. Bravo et merci.