Reviews for Dodge and Burn
Gingerandgreen chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
Hi Honey - your summary was perfect. Intriguing and wistful, with just enough information to pull a reader in. Was that always your first paragraph, or did you write it for the summary? Your Bella is so Cambridge. There is a small but distinct class of middle-aged women here who really come into their own in their fifties. They may appear eccentric to the rest of the population (although very classily so), but around here we say "she's so Cambridge, you know?" - and we know. Perhaps this is true of other university towns around the world? I've no doubt Bella will shake Edward's stiff soul out and hang it in the wind, but I bet there's a lot more to your story than that. Really looking forward to it.


Shamatt0403 chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
yes let's meet her again next Saturday. He wears a ring but is no longer married so he most likely a widower. He is neither young nor old so 40's? Abbie you stories are magical.
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
I understand the concept of having a legacy to fight against.

I have a baby sister who has full spectrum FAS. She has so

very many things set against her, and yet my hopes are so

high for her. Hopes that she can come into her own, and just

like that movie Benny and June, that she will some day meet

a man who is a wonderfully soulful and eccentric as she is,

and that they can have a life together. Everyone, no matter

how "different" they are deserves to know love.

I am eager to read more next Saturday!
tonerlady chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
How exciting, a new one, look really different abbie. He still has his wedding ring on, but alone, so I can assume he's still not over his previous wife? The way you describe Bella reminds me of Susan sarandon character in bull duram lol. So, is it safe to assume they are middle aged?
strangevisions chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
awesum.,luvd it 4 :)
mollybean chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
I was giddy when I saw that you're back. Saturday mornings haven't been the same since we left ToonWard. And this time, I'm in from the beginning. No matter where you take this, I know it will be intriguing and well-written.
jbjm chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
Thank you, thank you for not making me wait any longer for a new story! I'm the Isabella Swan to your writing (sans hippie skirts and ironic decor). - Jen
theywontdeleteme chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
That was quite a fun first chapter. Loved all the little details you took the time to write. I already can feel some of who they are. Looking forward to Saturdays
AfromMiami chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
I missed you! I love to wake up Saturday mornings with your stories ;) This Bella is adorable... sweet and very high on sugar... So...romance/ angst ? I'm ready for more :)
mimi53 chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
Oh Abbie! Another story! Thank you!
LLH88 chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
Great 1st chapter, the way you have introduced the characters, and even the story is very intriguing. I like an eccentric Bella and a reluctant Edward. I'm anxious to see how Bella brings Edward out of himself and what more she has to reveal to him. Again, Saturdays can't come soon enough. Thank you for sharing!

Lilypad10 chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
I am so excited about this story. There ie a lot going on with both of them and I can not wait to see it though. They are so different and that alone excites me.
annaharding chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
This sounds SO intriguing! And it seems the Edward has a hidden backstory? How old are these characters? I'm thinking late 30s? Bella sounds like a hoot - very poetic in her ramblings!

I'm in for the duration of the story!
his den of sin chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
I'm curious to see where this goes...So see you next Saturday yes!
jakbranton chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
Wedding Ring? Those two little words are giving me anxiety!
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