|Reviews for Dodge and Burn|
| Melolabel chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
Ohh what a lovely and intriguing start. Especially the two details of him not having a woman to be possessive over and yet still wearing a wedding band. I figured I ought to get in on the ground floor with this one since I TOTALLY missed toonward as a WIP. (gonna have to go back and read that one).
I found one teensy typo - erven instead of even. (In one of his thoughts on the porch toward the end).
I shall look forward to more of these two.
| cloudiekp chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
I am definitely in on this one! There is so much that intrigues me about this...not the least of which is the fact that they are both "somewhere in the middle" age wise. It isn't often that we don't get the young and the beautiful (we should definitely have more in the middle and still beautiful dammit!) or the significantly older and mildly dangerous with the young and naive. Don't get me wrong, I love all of those scenarios but this will be a refreshing change I think. Plus, this Bella is intriguing in her own right! Her quirkiness is definitely a fun draw. And they've already got the great banter going (even if his is mildly sarcastic and hers completely sincere...)
So, yeah...same time next week? :)
| SMtwiaddict chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
Wow, definitely a very different Bella but interesting. Edward is wearing a wedding band, makes me curious to know who he's married to and if she's around. Also, looking forward to getting to know this Bella and her story. We'll definitely meet next saturday ;)
| fniudhfhfhusdofidfds chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
Totally on board for this story. :D
| Microscop chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
Great to have you back!
| SeekingJamestown chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
I'm in. But I don't like the wedding ring.
| lucyblythe chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
Intriguing. Looking forward to more.
| gabby1017 chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
WoW... This is truly different... personalities... age... plot bunny... You have me by complete surprise... Yet, like Edward, I am drawn in...
Yes, see you every Saturday, my friend... Next time, I'll have my tea ready.
You never disappoint me!
Love you, Gabby
| Cullenboyz chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
It looks like a prop from margarine commercial.
*ding ding ding ding!* First I-had-to-stop-reading-to-lol-and-review line! :DDDD
Okay, that's a lie. There were ding-worthy lines earlier...
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*hangs head* *whispers* I sometimes (always) keep the cotton from pill bottles. I don't have any idea where I put it, but I keep it. Jesus, where the hell is all that pill bottle cotton?
What if she's lured him here under false pretenses, like the witch in Hansel and Gretel, and she actually plans to sedate him, chain him to a bed, fatten him up then cook him in a huge pot over an open flame?
Checkarooni on the chaining to the bed bit. I'm sure that wasn't actually in Hansel and Gretel, you perv. :P
*lotsa fantastic stuff that makes me hate you for being so talented, blah blah blah*
"That won't be necessary," she teases. "You aren't that good looking, Mr. Cullen."
DOES NOT COMPUTE
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh *hugs your ankles*
No matter how different your stories and your characters are, you're still YOU. And that is so, so wonderful. :')
My life is happier, now that I have abby Saturday mornings to look forward to again.
| H. Story chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
Wonderful! I'm so happy to start another of your stories!
| Soulseeker75 chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
Abi!you're back! How wonderful!
I am already intrigued! Cannot wait to read more!
| dreampills chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
new story? super excited!
| kell7777 chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
Well my Saturday mornings just got better! Great chapter, so many questions...can't wait til next weekend!
| WonkyGangsta chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
Is it next Saturday yet? Loving this eccentric Bella you've shown us so far. I cannot wait to see where this story goes!
| Bunch2009 chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
Wow what an amazing so plot. So refreshing. Loved it