Absolutely fabulous. I am going to look for your books asap!

Are you going to p2p this one, too?

Oh, my dear, I'm sure I reviewed this when I first read it- when you originally posted, but I just read the whole story again and just had to tell you how much I love this. I share many of Bella's fears, and as I get older and more forgetful, it scares me more. I say to my family all the time " I hope you still love me when I can't remember who you are." I'm kidding, but I'm not. My version of whistling in the dark. Thank you for sharing such a wonderful story, and such rich characters with us. I'm so happy you have published and can find a wider audience for your talent. You deserve it.
- Gretchen

Great story! I can see why you have published your other work! You are a very gifted writer. Thanks for sharing your gift with us.

This has been so touching. I have a loved one who is developing Alzheimer's. That's why I struggled reading it. I think Bella may be in the clear. Who knows for sure?

I loved finally knowing the meaning of the title. Also thank you for sharing your talent.

What a crazy day! So funny. I think this was needed after the drama on the beach.

I'm so glad that things are good again for them. I was glad Leo was receptive about JACOB but also sad for what they missed in those years apart.

This Bella was the most amazing person here, she was so different but in a good way, i think there should be more people like there, the summary doesnt do any justice to this story

So glad I read it, I cant get over how wonderful this bella was, she was so much better than the bella from the book

This story took my breadth away. I have been reading fanfiction stories for some time now and I haven't found a story like this. Bella in this story is full of life and god it made me feel so refreshed and energized! I am so glad to find it :)

Kuddos to you for such a enlightening vision and eloquence of words. Looking forward to read more of your stories!

This story was wonderful, beautiful, and real. And I love it. You have me crying. My heart goes out to you and your family. Thank you for this.

Oh. Shit... I'm afraid to read the next chapter.

Beautiful song.

I love this

I love the idea of just getting on a train and going wherever you want. Great chapter :)

Whaaaa! That was a punch to the gut.