Reviews for One Door Closes
Guest chapter 8 . 7/1/2012
Oh my! This is so exiting! I dont want Grell to dye! I just love your fic, please upload the nexts chapter soon! ( And please can you put some "explicit" lemon :3 ? )
Thank you for updating!
Jiinx Ne chapter 8 . 7/1/2012
Oh my gosh. Grell..
Always-Unpredictable chapter 8 . 7/1/2012
Nooooo! Grell!

This is getting good! XD
Guest chapter 8 . 7/1/2012
I like the story very's so unfair that people don't give it that much credit though. pisses me off to see a good story go to waste.
Flareose - Knifepoint Entry chapter 8 . 6/30/2012
Woah... This was intense O.O

What happened to Ronald... And most important, what happened to Grell. I hope their alright. I did love the fighting scene in here though, it was awesome. And you made a lot of suspense near the end of this chapter, nice job :D

Can't wait for the next part :3
Thundercat1 chapter 6 . 6/28/2012
JarOfBittersweets chapter 7 . 6/25/2012
Oh good William isn't the problem holding them up. But AHHHHHH! Cliffhanger! Lol
JarOfBittersweets chapter 6 . 6/25/2012
I hope this doesn't involve William...
darthv4der chapter 7 . 6/25/2012
Another brilliant chapter :D

Poor Ron, I hope he and Grell can repair their friendship :c Bit mean of Grell to choose Undertaker over Ron though, when he's equally in love with him :/ But then again he's an abuse victim so he can't really be called mean, so...

Yeah, I'm talking about nonsense now, so I'll end this review by saying how amazing this story is, and that I hope Will can at least get Grell's forgiveness and stop being a psycho ex girlfriend :D
darthv4der chapter 6 . 6/24/2012
Oh Will. *facepalm* *facephone* *facewall* ** *facesmashesthroughtheearth'scrust**facemagma* *facecenteroftheearth*

If Will wants Grell back (which will probably never happen now) someone needs to get it into his thick head that he needs to stop being a 'psycho ex girlfriend', stop beating up Ron and Grell and hatin' on Undertaker and just generally stop being a total c**t.

I don't really ship GrellxUndertaker but at least Grell is finally getting treated well. I just hope William 'psycho ex girlfriend' T Spears doesn't treat Grell any worse D:
Flareose - Knifepoint Entry chapter 6 . 6/23/2012
... I can't help feeling sorry for William, (just a bit though ;p) in some way, I think he did love Grell. But he let jealousy take over him, making him very untrustworthy of his lover :(

I'm glad Grell is with Undertaker now, I mean yeah, it's going to take sometime for him to heal, but at least he still has Ronald and Undertaker to help him with this... Though it's going to be a rough ride, because William seems to be abusing his power... A lot.

Well anyways can't wait to see the next chap. The calm before the storm has arrived O.O
Flareose - Knifepoint Entry chapter 5 . 6/23/2012
Love the fighting scene. It's about time William wakes up and realize that Grell doesn't want to be treated like some pet, but an actual human... Errr... I mean Shinigami... Well .

... Like a lover is what I meant to say. And to make things better I thing Undertaker and Grell are together now ;D
Flareose - Knifepoint Entry chapter 4 . 6/23/2012
Awww :(

Poor Ronald had his feelings hurt... I could tell be reading that he really loved Grell, and even though they never could be lovers like he wanted, I hope they could still be friends at least :)


Alright Grell! He finally stood up to William once ad for all. It's about darn time. And he was right, Ronald was willing to give him his love to.

So sweet :3
Flareose - Knifepoint Entry chapter 3 . 6/23/2012
I'm actually kinda glad that this happened. Maybe it's because of all the torture William put Grell under, that he sort of lost himself in the moment :)

I hope this means Grell will leave William soon O.O

Love the chap :3
Midknight Shadows chapter 3 . 6/20/2012
No I like the RonnieXGrell. It's cute and makes sense. I don't think anyone would stick with someone who abuses them THAT much. Certainly not Grell. And I think she is a bit out of character. She is a strong person, she's no always crying. Is there a second here where she isn't crying?
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