Reviews for Beautiful
ahtlolehvahd chapter 1 . 6/12/2013
i like this. something i can actually see happening on the show.
JewishNinjaChick chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
This is beyond epic. I positively love this.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
Love this 3 wish it would really happen! Team Tiva!
ZDaizy chapter 1 . 6/17/2012
Really cute and sweet, leaves a lot to think about on your own, but a lot to be desired :)
sternchan chapter 1 . 6/17/2012
Wonderful story. I loved it 3
Anonymous033 chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
Whoa o.o

So this was definitely unexpected, haha. I thought they were gonna go straight for the ... ahem, anyway, I like how he reacted upon finding the scar. I mean, it was probably as unexpected for him as it was for me, but he took it all in stride :D

And it's such a sweet ending! So this is your semi-smut, huh? :P I've to admit, it's pretty weird to be reading this while I talk to you on Twitter. But you're good at it. Maybe someday you'll be like LittleSammy :DDD

I digress. Don't worry about the story not making sense; I think it made perfect sense and you did just fine :) again, it's just such a sweet ending!

conservativegirl chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
Aww super, well, beautiful!
luzma chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
that beatiful...very good!...I am happy this fic
pacificbluegirl chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
Really liked this! All of it, but especially this part: "Not one word was exchanged; there seemed to be two gravitational pulls at work: one drawing her to his side and another stopping her from speaking. Because this was fine; they did not need to make noise to understand that this was an evening of mutual comfort. It was lopsided, yes, in favor of Ziva, but she knew that he needed it, too." Because I think he really would, need it too, in a situation like that because I think he'd need to feel useful, like he was making a difference, any difference he could and like he would be desperate to be there for her if she needed him (and of course she does).

Looking forward to more from you! :D x
Courtzylovesit chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
That was beautiful! Nawwwwww quite fluffy... Yes she is beautiful XD well done :P
Robern chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
that was beautiful, well done!