Reviews for Unexpected
Guest chapter 1 . 2/14/2017
JasonFrost7 chapter 1 . 12/16/2016
please expand
Midnight Raveness chapter 1 . 7/1/2014
I love the ending!
zuzufn chapter 1 . 5/10/2014
Comeon! Dont leave us hanging. Continue. Pretty please?
SpikedMilkshake chapter 1 . 8/28/2013
Hey I'm reviewing, and I would continue reading thi if you made more chapters. And it was soooooooo cute
breelee3032 chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
that was...AWESOME!
scorchedtrees chapter 1 . 12/15/2012
This is really interesting! I wouldn't mind seeing a continuation (:
raelover123 chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
That was awesome! Good job!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
Please continue! It can turn into something truly romantic and adventurous!
Lady Elisabeth chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
A very interesting scenario you've set up here. I've never considered Jet evil enough to rape her, but hey, who knows? He's a teenage boy with no respect for authority living with a bunch of other teenage boys in the forest, he's used to getting what he wants, and he wasn't afraid to wipe out a town to accomplish his goals. Rape might just be plausible.

I think you could definitely expand this if you wanted to. But it's also fine as it is. I shall leave it up to you(: thanks for the story!

Lady E
BeingWhoIWishIWas chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
Write more! it's really good!
WildCitrusSunflower chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
yea! could you make it a multi-chapter?
Guest chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
I'm going to agree with others and say...

Please, PLEASE continue the story. Please?

I mean, if you don't have the time or reasourses needed to finish it, then dont listen to me. But I and many others would probably enjoy seeing this turned into a longer story.

So, please?
splazbee chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
multi-chapter, multi-chapter pleasseeeeeeeee extand this story...
lethalromanticgirl chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
I found the idea really intresting. Your writting style is unique. Your descriptions were good and i could feel Katara's distress. Good job! I hope you write more.
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