Reviews for Whats That Outside The Door
Guest chapter 7 . 8/14/2012
I love Donna's opinion on the bike! It was a good story, could use some editing in some parts, but that's all okay. I don't think there's any other story quite like this one, and for that, I congratulate you.
Guest chapter 4 . 8/13/2012
All right, you're making me scared. I'm not sure I want your love D: Good story anyway
Guest chapter 2 . 8/13/2012
Ah ha, an NCIS reference. Good job there. A rather good story, if somewhat unusual. Wells. I have to say purple. You may have already posted the next chapter, but that doesn't stop me from hoping!
tiva forever2009-2010 chapter 7 . 8/13/2012
LOVED IT! GREAT JOB! PLEASE DO A SEQUEL-HAVE YOU THOUGHT ABOUT A MPREG ONE?:)
Charlotte-Renesmee-Cullen chapter 7 . 8/12/2012
I love the ending! Well done! :)
Someone chapter 1 . 8/5/2012
It seems like the grammar is a little broken here. It could just be me.
LLevey chapter 6 . 8/5/2012
Love the story! Poor Mike!
LLevey :)
Charlotte-Renesmee-Cullen chapter 6 . 8/3/2012
Amazing chapter! Only one more chapter left, now I'm sad. But I can't wait to read it though. :)
Msreadalot71292 chapter 5 . 7/18/2012
i thought Harvey doesnt sleep with married women...loved the baby time
Milky Blue chapter 5 . 7/17/2012
This is a great story. I love how Mike and Harvey always call eachother baby. It's so cute. ) Can't wait for your update.
CazB chapter 5 . 7/17/2012
Well i did'nt expect Scotty to be Mallory's mother..nice twist!
Charlotte-Renesmee-Cullen chapter 5 . 7/16/2012
Thanks for updating! Great chapter! :)
AidenVanHelsing chapter 4 . 7/13/2012
Great story so far !
1stBonesFan chapter 4 . 6/29/2012
Loving. This. Story. Especially Harvey going all protective papa on Louis. LOL
Charlotte-Renesmee-Cullen chapter 4 . 6/22/2012
Fabulous chapter! :)
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