Reviews for Vault 115 and the Land of Ooh
nuker850 chapter 10 . 4/2
Hello your story is awesome and very interesting!but i wonder when are ya gonna update it,i think its nearly 3 years ago when you updated you somehow able to update this great story it would be awesome:) hope Harry will find a power armor and probably would encounter the BoS or the NCR, or the Enclave or the Institute...but thats your decision since your the author of this story so its up to you to decide whats going to happen its time to finish this review
May you have a good day :)
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Guest chapter 10 . 3/24
Please make more
Guest chapter 9 . 8/29/2015
Dude great story you are a great author.
Guest chapter 3 . 8/28/2015
Nice bro one of the best stories I've read.
Some Guy chapter 1 . 7/23/2015
And then this story died, never to be finished.
Bob Jones chapter 1 . 12/12/2014
One word - ENCLAVE.
HighTreason25 chapter 1 . 8/18/2014
I couldn't even read this. You've got Wall-o'-Text, and you've got it bad.
You gotta start a new paragraph every time someone new starts talking, and just in general to split things up.
Probably should send this to a beta-reader and come back.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/25/2014
More!
Why no ending chapter 10 . 11/27/2013
Your authors notes contained unnecessary spoilers and you just left a good story out to dry... wtf?
Fives32 chapter 10 . 8/13/2013
Mhm, I still demand more chapters, it pleases me.
mastermind chapter 10 . 7/8/2013
I was happy till the brony part. if you make pony jokes or references im done with this fic.
odstrookie49 chapter 9 . 2/23/2013
what if they used a radio to contact people from other lands and what if the NCR heard the radio beacon
Guest chapter 9 . 2/17/2013
One shudders to imagine what will happen if the Enclave find out about Ooh

Also try to break up your sentances more, it's kind of hard to rean giant blocks of text.
Gir240 chapter 9 . 2/17/2013
Yay armageden in ohh yay ( i enjoy this chapter)
Riflemen526 chapter 9 . 2/16/2013
Woah, woah, woah! What is this?

Anyone who's played Fallout knows that you can't just walk past dead bodies and NOT scavenge for ammo or weapons.

Anyway, as for the chapter in general, it was quite lovely and I immensely enjoyed the Marcy/Harry portions of it. Also, needless to say, I'm quite interested in the full damage caused by the revolt in the vault.
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