|Reviews for Ineffable|
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/3
Jonas does receive a rainbow in the book.
| IAmNotUsingThisAnyMore chapter 1 . 6/20/2012
This is a nice short piece. Do you think you could write other short pieces or a long story? There are a lot of memories not mentioned in the book, so many people choose to create new memories for Jonas. You can play on this idea further or you can come up with a completely original plot.
I sometimes like to write a series of one-shots that are related somehow (see Heart to Heart Talk) or chapters that skip large periods of time (see Dissenters and Descendants).