|Reviews for Lord of Innistrad|
| Maryz Fayner chapter 6 . 9/9
I love your writing. You write actions of characters as driven by their character rather than by needs of a plot and you keep to established lore as much as you can. You seem to have a handle on Sorin's character which is more than I am willing to say about official writers that wrote his story in Eldritch Moon. Also I like how you suggested he wanted to know what was happening during his first planeswalk and since no book explaining it was available he wrote one himself later. Please show off more of his intellect and experience like this.
I have a few points I'd like to address however. Serra was not identified as an angel, she created heavenly realm full of angels and humans, but she herself was a human originally.
Sorin should have been in more agony during his siring. And Edgar himself should be unable to even speak coherently during is transformation. But I like your narrative, so perhaps some mention of other members of the circle holding Sorin in place while he was being force-fed the siring reagent? I felt that part could use some embellishment.
The way you work with mana is amazing. I hope you touch on unusual lands, that give more than one color of mana and perhaps some like Ravnica's Orzhov Basilica that give both at same time and require breaking previous connection with another land and cannot be used immediately.
Is his talisman going to be the stone in his armor? I like the idea of him keeping personal things like that down the centuries changed to suit his new needs and I cannot wait to see where and how he gets his sword.
I hope you will have a pregnant muse and good time writing because I have good time reading your work.
| Anon chapter 6 . 5/12/2013
Great story so far!
| Joe chapter 6 . 11/25/2012
Ok, my only complaint is that you aren't updating... I got this far... I REALLY WANT TO READ THE REST! Please! Itd be awesome if you updated. Thanks.
| Angeles chapter 6 . 10/30/2012
Excellent work, I enjoy reading this story very much; the detail and the believability that this fits into the world it's based of of is impressive, as well as the research that appears to have gone into this work. I do, however, have to note one thing within this chapter, and it's the only mistake I've noticed so far, is that Serra, herself, is not an angel.
| Alpha142 chapter 6 . 10/30/2012
Very, very cool story. I'm impressed with your ability to weave a tale! I hope to see more!
| joe chapter 6 . 10/11/2012
i like this fic. flat out epic so far
| joe chapter 3 . 10/11/2012
okay im really sorry but this is a huge pet peeve of mine. it's Stromkirk, not stormkirk. other than that i love the fic so far
| crimsonshrouds chapter 6 . 9/26/2012
Interesting story. I had an idea for an innistrad story as well that followed a Cathar who could use green healing.
| Nianque chapter 6 . 9/8/2012
Sorin. Why are you so awesome and badass?
I commend you on making a realistic story.
| cai-ann chapter 6 . 9/3/2012
A wonderful chapter, Your discribtion of Sorin's first Planeswalk was very well done. Him meeting Serra wasn't something that I thought of yet made sense and was well writtten. I highly enjoyed this and hoped to read more soon.
| Melkor44 chapter 6 . 9/3/2012
The worlds I noticed were Hoth, Mustavar, that place with the Ewoks (or was it the one with the Wookies?), and Ravnica. I know you said it would be from Star Wars/Elder Scrolls, making it Coruscant, but all I could think of was Ravnica.
Keep it up!
| Ulquiorra9000 chapter 5 . 8/18/2012
The slow pacing and strong attention to detail in this chapter definitely escalate the tension and drama of this historic event on Innstrad. Poor Sorin is scared and fainthearted about what's happening, but with his Spark activated and his vampire status achieved, he should find things to be easier now. Where will he end up, I wonder?
| cai-ann chapter 5 . 8/13/2012
I enjoyed this and I hoep to read more about Sorin's story soon.
| Sara chapter 5 . 8/7/2012
... holy shit, this is amazing! please post more soon!
| Garjzla abr Eldrvarya Sundavar chapter 5 . 8/6/2012
This is really good. I like your takeon a pre-Avacyn Innistrad, and I can't wait to see where this goes now that Sorin's spark has ignited. I'll be looking for the next chapter.