Reviews for Cupcake VS Kitten
Jasmine chapter 29 . 5/18
Hey hoping you actually update this soon
Kayla Schulz chapter 29 . 8/4/2014
cool but why u no continue
MaiXXxxXXNaru2014 chapter 22 . 1/5/2014
that slut ikuto better hurry the fucknup
GreecexTurkey1289 chapter 29 . 12/1/2013
kaysia nya chapter 1 . 8/28/2013
The ending part made me laugh so hard! X)
EternalBlaze5 chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
PLEASE,PLEASE,PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I love this story soo much and its been sooooo long since you've updated! I wanna see what happens next! You're a great writer and i love your stories especially this one! PLEASE PLEASE PRETTY PLEASE WITH A CHERRY ON TOP, UPDATE SOON! Love ya!
love crimson red ray88 chapter 29 . 7/2/2013
aww. wait it said “last thing i remember before i feel asleep was how i wanted to let this girl go.” don't u mean how i never wanted to let this girl go?
Svetocha chapter 4 . 7/1/2013
So I was bored and couldn't sleep so I decided to give this story another chance. It didn't work. The grammar and spelling problems are just too numorus and obvious to overlook.
It has a good plot but with all the mistakes it's very difficult to read and I personally can not enjoy it.
Good luck with your future endeavors.
kitty-ray chapter 29 . 6/5/2013
He wants to let her go or he doesn't? Hurry up and update. Sorry if I am demanding. When I like a story I can't wait for the new chapters...
Guest chapter 29 . 5/15/2013
Do not make her prgnent i hate when writers do that. So please don't
Rawrz chapter 29 . 5/13/2013
'How I wanted to let this girl go,' or, 'how I never wanted to let this girl go'? 0.o

Remember to double space your work c: It makes it much easier to read for everyone. When It's all bunched up, it just looks like a whole scramble of words. And do you have a beta reader? If not, you should get one. They could help with your spelling errors. C:

Okie, that's all. Bye. c:
redflower789 chapter 29 . 5/13/2013
What do u mean ' I wanted to let this girl go'? ?!...please tell me that was a typo ...please don't make him b like I hit it n quit it ...ill b SO mad
Arctic Alice Wolf chapter 29 . 5/14/2013
honestly I think you should do a couple more chapters or a second story continuing this just once more. It was fantastic btw. great writing for a second language.
squirtlepokemon215 chapter 29 . 5/13/2013
Hmp. Finally. But can you please make it a bit easier to read w/o cramming it all together; its kinda hard to read it.
Amu4ever chapter 28 . 5/5/2013
You little meanie! How dare you stop the chapter at such an interesting point?

Great cliffhanger :)

Interesting chapter, even thought it's a little short. Could the next chapter be a bit longer...please? *-*
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