Reviews for After the Riot
100recycled chapter 1 . 1/20/2021
Would be interesting to know how this would have gone on. This refusal has quite a different Touch, although the word blasphemous doesn't fit in.
MySarcasticGreenCrayon chapter 1 . 3/16/2018
I found this interpretation of what might have been to be both more and less painful than the story. It was excellent! Thank you for the story.
nancyjeanne chapter 1 . 2/15/2017
circa1910 chapter 1 . 12/28/2016
Moral of the story-do not rush her! She's correct- she is young, has no experience (or little) in these matters. "Madden" is a scary prospect. She is modest. It scares her. At least she didn't get the opportunity to say (too many) harsh things.
4fanci chapter 1 . 8/19/2016
A tragic ending. I love it! Perfectly wrong and perfectly right.
M chapter 1 . 8/3/2016
I've wondered about that scenario too and it's a wonderful take on this classic couple. Really enjoyed it! Would love it for you to continue someday if you ever want to get back to a great story!
nsfanficnewbie chapter 1 . 6/24/2015
Wow. I love the intensity of this story.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/15/2013
Very true to their characters. Great work.
Mere24 chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
Wow, I cannot believe that I have never read this before now. This is beautifully written. I have often wondered what no waiting time would do to the proposal!
Rae Smith Cobleigh chapter 1 . 12/20/2012
Clever: still producing the same outcome, even without the elements that the characters in the original story brought to the scene. Yet still in-character! If they had been given this chance, this is exactly how it would have turned out. Very nice. :)
LadyForrest chapter 1 . 10/27/2012
That was exciting. I also wondered what would of happened if John had stayed and sent his mother to get the dr. Nice!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/10/2012
I enjoyed this chapter very much thank you. It has always annoyed me that Mr Thronton listened to his mother and waited till the next day. Look forward to the continuing story .
Sacredwoman2k chapter 1 . 8/5/2012
You should continue developing this story. This is very good.

brkfstattiffys chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
This was a really good story. Very believable with the characters. Will you continue it or will it be a one shot?
kandern chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
Awwwwwwwww, it's still sad and didn't really change things between them. My heart breaks for Thornton who made himself vulnerable in declaring himself. Come on, Margaret, open yourself up to this dear man!
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