Reviews for Finding My Thunder
dianscot chapter 18 . 11/23/2014
Wow. That's a real first time. Not flowers and gentle. Just raw teen lust and love
dianscot chapter 17 . 11/23/2014
Yeah, curious about jane and irina. Will they re appear? Villains?
dianscot chapter 16 . 11/23/2014
Ah. I thought they'd have some love in the woods...

Don't get how j can be such a wiener. I guess from Paul?
dianscot chapter 15 . 11/23/2014
So renee was half black?
dianscot chapter 14 . 11/23/2014
Summer nights as a kid growing up... Beautiful.

Does e love James? Is James the most dangerous one here again? How is that even possible w all these villains? Does e only have to serve a yr or less if he enlists?
dianscot chapter 13 . 11/23/2014
Gah. I wish e needed me.

Riley is exactly the menace he is in TW. Not the worst, but still totally dangerous. What a pedo.
dianscot chapter 12 . 11/23/2014
Awesome, b breaking his window. A hole.

Ps. Love that she jumped the cliff not knowing how to swim, just trusting e.
dianscot chapter 11 . 11/23/2014
Sigh.

She is so sweet, and overly self sacrificing. Buying all that dog food when she's near starving?

So upsetting. The racism. Not that there isn't any now. But obviously, worse and more open then.
dianscot chapter 10 . 11/23/2014
Wow. Tears for b and how he was the only friend she ever had or wanted, and didn't have him for so long. But what a scene, the quarry. Beautiful.

Why no future, in his eyes?
dianscot chapter 9 . 11/23/2014
Is E half black? His brown skin, black hair, asking b if c thought he wasn't good enough for her? But having long hair.
dianscot chapter 8 . 11/23/2014
Sigh. Edward. I think this is the essence of my TW obsession. The hero rescuing her from singular loneliness and abandonment. Yes, I'm a Disney girl grown up. Don't regret it.
dianscot chapter 7 . 11/23/2014
Thank you for the MLK quote, about the immorality of allowing mistreatment of oppressors.

God, poor b. So her moms crazy was brain mets?

I'm betting E allowed Paul to bully him inton this job for being near b, or at least to figure out her dad. And he freed himself from Tanya when James got sent off cuz he was then able to get back to b. Even at risk of draft.
dianscot chapter 5 . 11/23/2014
Geez. That's a new one. James as his brother. So he had to protect him from getting thrown in jail? And that's how he hung out w b even tho he's two yrs older?

Like the parallel. E staying away, protecting b. Her thinking he doesn't want her around. James as the danger. B so alone except for E. Don't know why, I love the diff that are so refreshing, but so love it to carry the same troubles as TW.
dianscot chapter 4 . 11/23/2014
Smoking... Like it, bec it's unexpected.

Wondering what the motivation is for E. And his hx w B.

Can't get over the depth and dark of your fics. Wish I could savor them, but just so suspenseful, can't resist gobbling. Will re read slower in future. Just so happy to have found you.
dianscot chapter 3 . 11/22/2014
What is renee hiding?

Ps. Wanted to vote for Deep... But not listed when I looked
3,214 | « Prev Page 1 .. 2 3 4 5 6 7 14 .. Last Next »