Reviews for James the Just
BubblesL chapter 1 . 6/22
A sensitive but illuminating sketch which studies how James could have felt at that time and how his upbringing in that environment effected him personally.

Clearly a well thought out piece. I think that the repetition, sudden rhymes and word play at the end are useful for gauging James' state of mind or distractedness at the situation as well as providing a summary of how he might be viewing what had happened and the people from his childhood.

Thank you.
sapphireswimming chapter 1 . 7/12/2013
Wow. Really impressive that you've got a double drabble set up. And I love the deadly cold feeling you're left with at the very end. Really well done.
Song of Grey Lemons chapter 1 . 12/25/2012
This was... God, this was good and scary at the same time. The second section is a bit haunting, with the rhyming and 'lies' bit.
Excellent piece, Lindenharp.

dassenach chapter 1 . 12/9/2012
Genius, actually.

You managed to convey in 200 words what others never manage to do, blathering in 20,000 words.

CarlieDi chapter 1 . 9/7/2012
YumOnigiri chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
That was REALLY good! :)
secand time chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
Really nicely done! It helps explain missing parts of the episode and really stays with you once you read it.
Kasumi Hoshi Nishida chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
I like this very much. There's so much that goes unspoken in "Dead of Winter" and I'm glad you've done something to rectify that. Thank you so much.
kennytar chapter 1 . 6/17/2012
Thus drabble is a great example how to say all with only few words. Love it!