Reviews for The Magnificent Octopus
sfjoellen chapter 40 . 11/21/2014
I love the smell of Order 66 in the morning.. it's Hammer time!
sfjoellen chapter 27 . 11/21/2014
Jarvis.. Can I haul him off? Clone him? Would he fit on an Iphone?
sfjoellen chapter 22 . 11/21/2014
the zeppelin comment had me laughing so hard i couldn't see. the whole idea of them peeping on cap and the teacher was genius.
sfjoellen chapter 17 . 11/21/2014
Black Widow's brain tumor seems forced but what the hell, it's a comic book so I'm rolling with it. Lots of fun to read, thanks!
sfjoellen chapter 12 . 11/21/2014
Tony's jealous snit was really funny, thanks!
Guest chapter 10 . 11/11/2014
OK, why is Tony so OOC and disgustingly unintelligent?
HonestlyImperfect chapter 15 . 11/5/2014
This is a fantastic story. Multifaceted and well written.

The fight and tasering of Steve and Tony literally had me laughing out loud and almost waking up my roommate. Top notch stuff.

Also: "dialogue ho" may be my new favorite phrase.
orangeeucalyptus chapter 44 . 10/23/2014
Im sorry but this is too good i had to comment again. Tell me WHY this isnt the plot for the avengers movie! This should be the " avengers untold" book or something! I swear to god show this to somebody and im telling you itll be on the best sellers list in no time trust me. still on chapter 44 and this is hands down the best fanfiction EVER and im serious. you are the best writer ever!Keep up the fantastic work !
orangeeucalyptus chapter 9 . 10/22/2014
To answer your question at the end of the authors bite in chapter 8 ...yes... Yes i find it COMPLETELYintoxicating. Im loving the story so far, its great and usually im always in it for the pepperony but here i can read through it all. I love the conversations and the banter. Its absolutely perfect.
LixPix chapter 22 . 10/2/2014
Okay, I was going to read the whole thing and then review but this chapter was just too damn brilliant to ignore. I literally had to stop reading because I was laughing so hard. I pictured them perfectly while reading this, almost like I was actually watching it on the big screen. You have captured these guys to perfection! Thank you so much for this story, and this chapter! It was awesome! :-D x
nancyozz chapter 78 . 8/10/2014
Well I for one hope Tony and Pepper do get married and have a baby girl very soon..that would be magical
nancyozz chapter 77 . 8/10/2014
I loved every single always it was a privilege to read sad it's over one writes Pepperony and the rest of the avengers like you do
nancyozz chapter 76 . 8/10/2014
Nice little redemption at the end there...and such wonderful pepperony goodness
nancyozz chapter 74 . 8/10/2014 Darcy walking into that mess..,,I see Darcy as weirdo pseudo sister to Tony
nancyozz chapter 73 . 8/10/2014
Oh crap...don't tell me that Hammer is still alive...of course it's love to do this to us
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