Reviews for The Heir and the Spare
Spawn chapter 24 . 3/15
I thought you did a great job on this. The switch between the tabloid stuff and what was going on at the time was a little bit distracting at times. The Rag Mags and who they cater to are pure nastiness. The sad part is that your depiction of them was probably spot on.

I liked Esme and Bella as sisters with Renee and Charlie as their parents, as well as Carlisle and Edward as the Princes. I'm happy that Esme and Carlisle will get their happily ever after, so to speak, but sad because I doubt Bella and Edward will. Esme wasn't warning Bella for nothing.

I enjoyed this story. It would be a share to leave it unfinished. Thanks for sharing.
upsidedown chapter 24 . 3/8
This story is amazing, you are such a talented writer! Thank you for sharing with us! :-) And reading the recent reviews is making me really angry. I mean, seriously?! How insensitive can some readers be?! There certainly is a reason this story hasn't been updated but instead of being supportive and encouraging most are rather rude and accusing. Hello? You get an amazing story for free and than you make demands? I don't understand those people.
Guest chapter 24 . 3/7
Please please update!
Guest chapter 24 . 2/15
Hope you update soon!
Mystik Angel 85 chapter 24 . 2/15
Can't wait to see their completed, please update sooner than later.
Guest chapter 24 . 2/14
Please you have to finish this. Is too funny and beautiful. Its goin to be a crime not to finish it.
Guest chapter 24 . 1/25
Can you tweet or post a status update on when you think you'll post the remains bits of this story. Tom Petty said "the waiting is the hardest part." Truth.
L09 chapter 24 . 1/9
Whaaaaaa... don't leave a girl hanging here!
Lady Chancellor chapter 24 . 1/4
Really enjoyed reading your story. I think it is one of the best I have read in awhile. I hope you update soon. Can't wait to find out what Edward and John are up to. It seems that Edward wants Bella to get pregnant and it makes me think maybe his brother can't have children or maybe Bella's sister can't so they are tricking Bella into giving them an heir. Please update soon.
lady in waiting chapter 24 . 12/28/2016
In August you tweeted that this story would be posted in it's entirety on november 5th :( I realize something happened and in the beginning of November you tweeted saying you had to postpone it, but surely you'd have a LOT finished by then? Hope you'll post soon, now that the christmas season/crazyness is over. This story has been annoying to follow when you only upload once or maybe twice a year. It's frustrating, I just want to finish reading it! You write really well, so please don't be offended. I wouldn't be frustrated if the story was shitty, I clearly like it enough to come back to it. But honestly, it's been over 4 years. Have some mercy on us.
AREITO chapter 24 . 12/12/2016
I love this story. I miss not having an update yet.
I'm thinking of begging
queenb9903 chapter 24 . 12/9/2016
So sad to see this hasn't been updated in awhile! It's so good! Hope you come back and finish it, it's a fun story and I've got to know what Edward is up to!
Twimam23 chapter 24 . 12/9/2016
Wow! Amazing, loving this! But I've just seen it hasn't been updated in a while. :( Will you be coming back to it? Xxx
Guest chapter 24 . 12/5/2016
Come back to this story PLEASE!
Munny44 chapter 24 . 11/30/2016
Okay i have a theory on Edward's secret burden. Esme is infertile and therefore cannot produce an heir to the throne with Carlisle. So Edward must produce an heir via his marriage so his future spouse must be suitable and agreeable to commit to a live where their child will have to undergo the scrutiny and intense upbringing of being the heir to the throne.

Please update! I've been rereading this for the past 2 weeks and going back to passages that I enjoy!
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