|Reviews for The Heir and the Spare|
| lyryc69 chapter 26 . 11/3
Love this story and hope at some point you are up to completing it3
| sheilagilger chapter 2 . 9/21
| sheilagilger chapter 26 . 9/21
Wha t a fabulous and different story for Bella and Edward!
I hope you are out there and OK!
Please come back and tell us the rest.
Thank I you for sharing your words!
| sosueme chapter 26 . 8/26
I'm enjoying these characters so much. Their humor, smarts, and secrets keep me devoted! I hope you are doing well.
| sosueme chapter 7 . 8/23
| sosueme chapter 2 . 8/23
Intriguing characters. Next chapter!
| janeway4u chapter 26 . 8/18
I simply adore your writing! Please complete this story, I am dying to know what happens next. Outstanding!
| Guest chapter 26 . 8/2
Either Esme or Carlisle are infertile. And they know it. So Edward’s kids will have to carry the line. So it’s condemning Bella to that life if Bella sticks around. Or, plot twist: Carlisle is infertile so Edward is expected to impregnate Esme based on some archaic rule? That list was a list of possible wives for Edward since his heir matters. (Or a list of secret surrogates for Esme?)
| Janina14 chapter 26 . 5/23
I hope you’ll continue this story! I would love to know the reason Esme and Edward are so shady about some secret, albeit it feels like Edward tries to leave the shadyness behind for Bella’s sake. I hope they don’t break each others heart. Bella seems committed to make it work.
| penguincullen88 chapter 1 . 5/16
I love all your writing especially the Museum & its counterpart. Was endeavoring to follow you on twitter if you still use it (I have a pen name). Anyway, if you do still check here, I'd love to gush about all the things I especially love about the characters in those stories as well as anything else you write. Cheers! emmy
| CindyWindy1 chapter 26 . 5/8
Was hoping the recent royal happenings would inspire a chapter, lol! Still love your story. Hope you're well.
| smriti24 chapter 26 . 3/4
Love the story
Hopefully you update soon
| Guest chapter 26 . 2/13
Not sure if this comment will go through, I just randomly recalled this fic, glad to see it still be alive. Take as muchal time as you need! (Psst, I believe the ffnet days are numbered ,;/)
| wordsequalmight chapter 25 . 1/19
omg I need to know: Edward is RoyalWatcher1, Esme is infertile which is why Edward needed to be pulled from active duty and told to find a wife so he can have kids and shore up the line of succession. I realize these aren’t questions but statements, but please continue so I find out the answers / get my suspicions confirmed?!
| lissaboss1993 chapter 26 . 1/15
I honestly did this to myself I broke my rule of reading incomplete stories and now I'm paying for it.