Reviews for The Heir and the Spare
liela-k chapter 18 . 5/9/2020
that piano scene was hot. reminded me of pretty woman
liela-k chapter 17 . 5/9/2020
this is horrible. the papps not the story lol. I feel so bad when I see the headlines regarding Meghan Markel. these horrible blogs remind me of perezhilton. not sure if your familiar with him. he runs a blog that would do these type of article. make celebrities' lives a living hell. i don't think he's as harsh anymore but you can tell he was one of those overweight insecure gay guys not that there's anything wrong with any of those things. I guess losing weight and becoming a dad changed him but his blogs were particularly harsh. also really curious as to what Esme is talking about. first she praises him the she warns bella about him.. hhmm what's really going on.

really good story cant wait to keep going
Guest chapter 26 . 5/7/2020
Yes! So glad to have an excuse to read this all from the beginning again. It's awesome, so happy you're back on the wagon in lockdown. Be safe!
ShillsChills chapter 26 . 5/9/2020
Is Esme infertile? is that why Edward had to come back? Saw that coming for a while... Can't wait to find out what's going to happen
pbadeaux10 chapter 26 . 5/8/2020
So glad you’re back!
V.cunhacarmo chapter 26 . 5/8/2020
i'm so happy! thanks for the update! love from Brazil!
Guest chapter 26 . 5/5/2020
It was so good to get back to reading this. Cant wait for more!

~the real teacher
prettymomma128 chapter 26 . 5/5/2020
I love this story! Great chapter!
Joey Cullen chapter 26 . 5/5/2020
Still love this like the 1st read I did, loving the new chapter and hoping more will be along soon
zia892 chapter 25 . 5/3/2020
Oh my god... The title makes so much more sense now!
Cdmtl chapter 26 . 5/1/2020
So so happy to see thos update, and hopefully more to come?!
This pandemic is devastating, and I'm so grateful for fictional evasipn and the great authors sucn as yourself who generously gift us with sucn great storytelling.
With all the hoopla around Prince Harry and Meghan, yoir stpry was fresh on my mind.
I guess Esme definitely can't have children. Is that a consequence of a STI given to her by Carlisle, or is it because he's the infertile one? I hope it's on him.. can't imagine the tabloids if it were Esme's "fault". The woman always get the blame/respomsability/pressure on the reproductive front, much like in every other sphere in life.
Does it all mean that Edward is not to spare anymore, but the heir, and thus hisand Bella's future child will be the heir apparent?
wordsequalmight chapter 26 . 5/3/2020
I absolutely love this story! I am feeling the lockdown too, and I hope you’re keeping safe from all this madness! Also, I am totally pegging Edward as RoyalWatcher1, that E/C are infertile and that he needs Bella to produce a royal heir.
QWhidbee10 chapter 26 . 5/3/2020
I'm under curfew in PA... It sucks ass! The lines, mask, and everything in between. You and your family are in my prayers. Bring on the short chapters. I absolutely love this story.
katiej1 chapter 26 . 5/2/2020
Thank you for coming back to update this story!
Guest chapter 26 . 4/30/2020
Just found your story and couldn’t stop reading.. I have so many different theories and can’t wait to see where you take us on this journey. I do think something happened with C since Edward said “the only thing I’ll give Bella is a baby” also will it ever come out what Edward meant when he told his father “The other one” talking about which paperwork she would sign?

I think the list was a list of women was to produce an heir but now he’s found Bella, my only question is why does he keep telling her she’ll be the one to leave him, what is he hiding.

Please please please with a cherry on top update soon
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