Reviews for The Heir and the Spare
Judyblue95 chapter 20 . 11/10/2015
I hope Esme is wrong about Edward. He did say that she would be the one to end their relationship. Would he have said that if he didn't mean it? I'm hoping not. Sisters do have fights like that. I wonder if the day will come when they don't make up after one of those...
Judyblue95 chapter 19 . 11/10/2015
All that protocol and all those responsibilities and all that doing stuff for appearances sake would be a giant turn off for me. Either that or it would feed my insecurities so well that I might lose myself. Poor Bella...
Judyblue95 chapter 18 . 11/10/2015
Her not believing that he is serious about her is her way of putting up a wall, a defense mechanism, just in case he really isn't. I get that. I've done that before. It must be difficult to maintain that wall when his fingers are inside her...that was hot!
Judyblue95 chapter 17 . 11/10/2015
So Heidi, her personal assistant, has been the source of leaks? Ugh. I'm sure that feels like such a betrayal. Sorry she's out of a job temporarily but glad she's moving in with Edward. Serious stuff!
Guest chapter 17 . 11/10/2015
Do you get inspiration from game of thrones?
Judyblue95 chapter 16 . 11/10/2015
I love that you do research so diligently and go for the realism. I really do. This shit happens to Royals and I'm not sure how they live like that. It almost makes me feel sorry for them. Almost. I love how E and B are getting closer...really!
Judyblue95 chapter 15 . 11/10/2015
LOVE their q and a of each other. What a fascinating version of 20 questions! The police did sweep this under the rug, but I guess that is to be expected. Everyone knows paps are scum and ask questions like those on purpose to incite. ooh..off comes her robe...
Judyblue95 chapter 14 . 11/10/2015
I love, I really do, the witty tabloid stuff you put at the beginning of each chapter. It also horrifies me that people actually believe that stuff! Looks like things are heating up quickly between them. Good for Bella for going for what she wants...good for Edward for showing restraint until she does.
Judyblue95 chapter 13 . 11/10/2015
my favorite chapter so far. he is just a boy and she is just a girl. just as they start to get real, Angela saves them. I hope more of this realness is yet to come...
Judyblue95 chapter 12 . 11/10/2015
that's a shocker! he actually has substance to his existence. how about that! maybe this will enable Bella to see him in a different light...
Judyblue95 chapter 11 . 11/10/2015
gah! all the gossip chatter drives me crazy. don't people have better things to do? guess not...wonder what happens next...ah, yes, the chapter is written so off I go to read it...
Judyblue95 chapter 10 . 11/10/2015
I like that you are deepening the plot. The fun, humorous stuff is great, don't get me wrong, but this chapter hints at what lies beneath that stuff. I'm still engrossed and reading eagerly.
Judyblue95 chapter 9 . 11/10/2015
wonder why Kate's name is crossed off. wonder what the list is of...and why her name is not on it. despite his not-so-royal beginning with her, things are changing...
Judyblue95 chapter 8 . 11/10/2015
This is very entertaining. He likes her. Truly. She likes him but is loathe to admit it. He gets her stoned. Loved the kiss...
Judyblue95 chapter 7 . 11/10/2015
oh I didn't expect THAT at the end of the chapter! now we're getting somewhere!
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