Reviews for The Heir and the Spare
gabby1017 chapter 8 . 7/1/2012
The story is progressing nicely... Edward is a doper and Bella needs to loosen up... He's taking her to bed... with or without him?
readingmama chapter 4 . 7/1/2012
"It appears my reputation has preceded me," he says.

"No, Sir—only the contents of your stomach."


Oh she is in a weird place. She can't outright smack him, but I kind of want to for her.
insanemum chapter 8 . 7/1/2012
And he's going to be a complete gentleman, right? *cocks eyebrow*
MrsZ49 chapter 8 . 7/1/2012
Why is he taking her to his room? He could have just left her at Esmes place. Crazy!

I wonder what Edward is thinking...

Cant wait to see what happened.

readingmama chapter 3 . 7/1/2012
Uhg, he puked on her! On man, he won't be winning her over anytime soon. But I can see him playing it off as a poor little rich boy thing. Naw, he'll still have to work. LOL

Great job
majose chapter 8 . 7/1/2012
I wonder if the new pictures were meant to be a diversion...
And i dont understan why he is attracted to her because, other than reconigzing that he is pretty, she does not seem attracted to him. But really, she doesnt know him
readingmama chapter 2 . 7/1/2012
This should be good. I love a good love/hate relationship.
GorGirl chapter 8 . 7/1/2012
Now she'll know all about High-Ness first hand.
tff000 chapter 8 . 7/1/2012
can;t wait to see what happens next :)
readingmama chapter 1 . 7/1/2012
The monarchy she'd devoted her entire life to preserving was now in danger because her son couldn't keep his dick in his pants. - so he is like Prince Harry? LOL

Great start, looking forward to reading more.
Capricorn75 chapter 8 . 7/1/2012
I hope he hurries up and grants her permission to call him Edward instead of Sir.
CoffeeLover16 chapter 8 . 7/1/2012
Lovin this. Not sure if I have ever read a Bella and Esme sister fic before. I like it!
limona chapter 8 . 7/1/2012
Somehow I missed a chapter and had to go back and catch up. I'm withholding comments until I see what happens next. But I'm looking forward to seeing what is next.
EJ Santry chapter 8 . 7/1/2012
One of my favorite thing about your characters is their honesty, for better or worse.
Elvire23 chapter 8 . 7/1/2012
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