Reviews for The Heir and the Spare
hts123 chapter 3 . 6/18/2012
I like this Bella. Snarky not sweet.
LibraryLady08 chapter 1 . 6/18/2012
I'm fascinated!
sml6446 chapter 3 . 6/18/2012
LOL, love it. Nothing like vomit to say hello with.

Stephanie
Twiggalina chapter 3 . 6/18/2012
Great first impression LOL!

Great chapter!
tff000 chapter 3 . 6/18/2012
yuck :)
bspest04 chapter 3 . 6/18/2012
you should have heard me giggling just now... awesome! lovin it!
Shamatt0403 chapter 3 . 6/18/2012
This wedding is going to be a hoot. Bella will be the maid of honor and I am sure Edward will stand up for his brother and they will loathe each other. Perfect!
marigold123 chapter 3 . 6/18/2012
Well if Bella didn't like Edward already...throwing up on her probably clinched it! LOL! Plus Edward is hiding out while someone else tells Lauren they're over. Gah!

"...Then again, she's spent a lot of time trying on tiaras this week, and it's a well-known fact they inhibit brain power..." LOL!
DawnsWhimsy chapter 3 . 6/18/2012
Eww just eww I say kick his royal ass Bella!
baldtomato chapter 3 . 6/18/2012
oooooH! i had to read it a second time to get the Highness joke LOL. Why would Esme say she was hoping she won't see him till the wedding, i thought she was defending him in front of Bella earlier.
shaz308 chapter 3 . 6/18/2012
Not a great first impression.
NKubie chapter 3 . 6/18/2012
How rude of me is it that I think this is one of the best E/B introductions EVER! What a douche! But it will make a good story for their grandchildren. LOL
TessLouise chapter 3 . 6/18/2012
Oh, Edward...sigh.
MDtwiwriter chapter 3 . 6/18/2012
Well he made one hell of a first impression. :)
Wallacelv chapter 3 . 6/18/2012
I had to read this a couple of times to understand what happened. I really want to know what Edward thought Esme was upset about...why is Esme so patient with him. I am enjoying the ride!
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