Reviews for In The Marble Halls Of Althenia
Squirtlevsyoshi chapter 20 . 12/5/2016
Ok, so I've had this story hanging out in my favorites for a while now, and I just kept putting off reading it constantly. But I decided to give it a shot yesterday and dear gods I couldn't put my tablet down. Well fucking done, you had me super excited and feeling all these emotions throughout the story. I completely and 100% picked up on the Lion King story line and it just made it that much better. Especially because you gave it your own twist and style. I loved it! Fantastic job, do not stop writing.
apiegohome chapter 20 . 7/29/2016
This story truly was an epic read! I loved how much detail and effort you've put into this, and the mythology you created was so interesting! The ending was beautiful! Thank you for writing!
lucky6manga chapter 20 . 11/15/2015
I really enjoyed this story overall since it was truly unique. I like the character development in Riku, and it was interesting to read about his journeys after his escape. However, my pet peeves, besides the spelling errors, were that within the final battle, the Sephiroth-Xemnas pair said "whore" way too many times and that the battle cries and insults were a bit too cheesy. I think they said "whore" more than 12 times in total, and the conversations during the battle, about surrendering and about Shiva and Diablos, took away the seriousness. That's just the way I felt, but it may be different for others. The ending was adorable, and I like how everything ties together. I would, however, like to read more Riku and Sora's relationship developing afterwards since the epilogue did not feel like an epilogue.
11rooms chapter 20 . 7/11/2015
What a great and wonderful story!
I love the way this story turned out
I would love to see the epilogue part 2! hihihii
thankyouu for writing the story! :D
Amestri chapter 20 . 7/2/2015
A great ending to that incredible story, thank you for writing it
Hinata's Shadow1 chapter 20 . 6/29/2015
This story was fantastic, and the end was perfect. Thank you for sharing this.
mochiusagi chapter 20 . 6/22/2015
Wow, just wow. That was a wonderful ending! Full circle, and it even included the title of the work. So very sad to see this story go, it was an exciting 20 chapters spanned over 3 years.
Kunoichi21 chapter 20 . 6/22/2015
Oh my God, I love you. I need a tissue... Like, for real. I can't... I can't believe it's over. After all this time. And I just... Augh, I wanna hug you and tell you how amazing this experience has been, to your face! But alas, I cannot. I shall have to settle for leaving a review. Let me tell you how insanely proud of you I am for finishing this wonderful and unique story! It truly added it's own twists and turns to an already beloved story from my childhood, so of course I absolutely loved reading this. And now that it's done, I have to go back and read it all at once. Thank goodness I have Wednesday and Thursday off, because I'm totally going to take advantage of it. Very happy you have your connection to Pahoyhoy and that she still serves as a muse and inspiration to your creativity. Pass along a word of thanks on my behalf, are an inspiration yourself, to me. Because you make me want to get back on the ball of writing my own story again. I want to finish something I know is great, and with my current one, Consequences, I know I can. So thank you as well, for serving to inspire me. You are a wonderful person, and I will always covet your mind for the ideas and creativity you get. Congratulations on finally finishing it. It's been a long time coming, and I'm so happy to have been along for the ride from the beginning. Go out and celebrate (at some point), for achieving this accomplishment. Seriously. After all this, you deserve it. *heart*
Kunoichi21 chapter 18 . 6/21/2015
Amestri chapter 17 . 5/2/2015
A great chapter, and a really great story as well. Can't wait to read more !
randomadorablepikachu chapter 17 . 3/13/2015
You evil evil muffin 0.0

Well, you probably know by now that I love this story and it'd be pretty damn hard to make me no longer love it. I hope you continue soon

Kinda wish there was more story line involving Vexen now, though, poor guy only gave off a minor impression compared to lots of everyone else in the battle. Or maybe that's just me -shrugs-

Keep goin', good work, you crazy shameless crackshipper you :P
Hinata's Shadow1 chapter 17 . 3/11/2015
Well that certainly was unexpected, but it does and an interesting element to how this could all play out in the end.
Kunoichi21 chapter 17 . 3/11/2015
Holy shit. I... this was so unexpected. Wow. Roxas is the son of Marly and Vexen? Damn. Talk about a twist!
randomadorablepikachu chapter 16 . 1/9/2015
I adore your work
Hinata's Shadow1 chapter 16 . 1/8/2015
I was wondering who they were going to try to get Sora to bond with. That answers that question.
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