I want to criticize:Why isn't there a POV of Conan/Shinichi's parents when they heard the news? It's like there's something missing. Hopefully in the sequel there will be that scene before entering the main you want to add a scene where Rokurou apologizes, please don't go straight to Conan, but first skip the people around try to keep Conan away from Rokurou, especially Ayumi, Ran, and Kogorou because they know Conan is still traumatized Even though he avoided it. The three of them collaborate to protect Conan from Rokurou, assisted by Genta, Ai, Professor, and Mitsuhiko. Rokurou gave up and wanted to commit suicide but was prevented by his wife who said "first prove to them that you are normal and won't hurt them they will meet you with him. Trust me" since then he has been trying to seduce Conan's guards by doing good things so that they believe and bring Conan and Rikorou together.
This is a story from the third book of Alvin's Nightmare but because that book wasn't good enough I brought it here with the intention of improving book tells the story of a child (Chipmunks) The one who was abused by his uncle.

I love you mitsuhiko

menurutku itu tak apa apa sih karena ini ceritamu bukan cerita mereka jadi sesuka hatimu mau ngarang gimana. aku tak masalah toh itu alasan logical selagi enggak keluar jalur. it's fine for me. banyak kok cerita yang enggak menginputkan suatu tokoh karena enggak relevan atau ingin menonjolkan karakter lain.

oh gosh conannn

I wonder who's the next target

THIS IS MASTERPIECE! Ahhhhh there is so many words of love that I am ready to shot it all to you (and this fiction as well). Because for real, I have been looking for kind of fiction like this, this is genius! this is a gem, I may sounds fucking hyperbolic but trust me for this one, I really love you hehe. I read the whole fic (gladly it was completed when I found it) in 3 days marathon, the best decision even (even I literally neglected my study hours). The thrill, the IN CHARACTER-NESS, the plot, everything, the dedication of you to research all of it carefully, oh Winter, I will happily to read more of your DC FF in the future.

Love, ButterPeanut

Man that person is super dead if Vermouth found out about this.

Kogoro being all protective is so heartwarming.

Thank you so much for your hard work! I truly enjoyed the adventure you took me on. All the best :)

First thought: AHHHHH he's alive, they made it!

Second thought: Edogawa Conan, you are so very grounded.

Ahahaha.

Well, that was horrifying ...

Anyways, great read! This story was absolutely addictive. Thanks for posting and writing!

Ik this is supposed to be, like, intense and all, and I FEEL it, but also I can't help laughing at the murderer. Like, you made the wrong choice, buddy. You're sure in for it now. This man thinks the police are the joke, but little does he know, it was him the whole time.

Idk, I just can't stop laughing and making fun of him. He's gonna get it so good Fjdfglfdjsdfljdgmndlfjdk

i remember, the first time i read this story, this chapter absolutely blew my mind...the MO is crazy, and yet so absurdly simple that it feels just like something a real serial killer would do! that research you did in order to craft this story definitely paid off VERY well.

Oh no!
Conan!

Oh, so Kogoro do cares for Conan. Even if he would never admite it.
That's sweet.

It's sad to see Kogoro have yet another one of his all drunk moments. But love those times he is like a father to Conan.