| Reviews for Catch My Breath |
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   Halo221 chapter 11 . 5/27 Short and sweet story! Thanks for sharing it! |
| readicted chapter 12 . 2/4 I liked reading their prequel. |
| readicted chapter 11 . 2/4 They certainly did move very fast, but they built a beautiful, loving family. My hubby and I moved fast too. Fell in love fast and hard, very similar to these two, though we had a year long engagement. We're at the point that we've been together longer than we were without each other. In some ways they remind me of hubby and I, my own polyblend uniform wearing love. Thanks for sharing. |
| readicted chapter 9 . 2/4 I don't know why I thought Bella said she was using an IUD when they were together the second time. But, when Edward noted that Bella looked like she was about to toss her cookies at lunch, I wondered if it was solely nerves, or something more. |
| readicted chapter 8 . 2/3 Hmm. I like the awkwardness of their dinner. Meeting the (young) parents of your older boyfriend, especially one that's established probably is awkward. His parents weren't overly effusive. They're sizing her up and getting to know her, and that's fair. The comment about her online grad program was unnecessary and petty though. Glad both mom and Bella apologized. Also glad there was no big, angry, dramatic exit. |
| readicted chapter 6 . 2/1 Glad he's taking her out. |
| readicted chapter 5 . 2/1 Welp, didn't exactly expect that either. Sitting chest to chest, erotic, gentle, intimate. |
| readicted chapter 4 . 2/1 Charlie let Edward stew all day in his anxiety, lol. That didn't go exactly as I had imagined either, but Charlie didn't seem too irate the night before. Or actually, earlier that morning. |
| readicted chapter 3 . 1/31 Oh Bella. Edward probably could've gotten away with a vague answer that didn't raise suspicions. LOL Bella's a bit of a mess. |
| readicted chapter 2 . 1/31 Oh that was awkward. I'm glad Edward wasn't pitiful. He left, giving her a convenient out, which she fumbled. Perhaps seeing him leave made her realize she'd really like to see him again. Way to get caught by your boss doing the walk of shame from his daughter's place. Yikes. |
| readicted chapter 1 . 1/31 "I sleep walk." LOL |
| ecullensgurl chapter 12 . 12/11/2023 I really loved this and i don't think I've lol this much reading in a long time, so thank you for writing and sharing it |
| QueenGB chapter 7 . 6/21/2023 Why give him hobbit feet? Polyblend was enough. |
| Revin12 chapter 11 . 5/18/2023 The story was beautiful ️ |
| fanfictionalcolic chapter 12 . 4/11/2023 Hilarious |