|Reviews for Catch My Breath|
| laylak500 chapter 12 . 3/7
Wow I just loved this so much. I wish you would revisit these two, it was magical. Thanks for writing.
| Tarbecca chapter 12 . 2/18
Recommended in the Fic Dive over at ADF. Thanks for sharing
| Cullenfan524 chapter 12 . 2/15
This was such a cute little story!
| albadolores chapter 11 . 1/24
This is a wonderful story,i enjoy it very much. thank you 3
| Guest chapter 12 . 1/18
| Treestar2509 chapter 12 . 1/8
These two are ridiculously cute. I had a great time reading their story. Well done. Thanks for sharing.
| alc219 chapter 6 . 1/8
This fic is ridiculously cute, I love the way you've written the characters! x
| PreciousJuls chapter 12 . 12/4/2013
Can I just say that this Edward was sweet and adorable and a little unsure and I LOVED IT!
| twirob chapter 12 . 11/26/2013
awesome bit of fluff i love that you make edward masen! ;)
| onlybelieved chapter 1 . 11/11/2013
oh my god.
I loved this so much. is there more? There needs to be more of this bella and edward!
Great characters, lovely writing and thanks for sharing 3
| Guest chapter 4 . 11/9/2013
yeah, i'm really not liking bella. making someone feel inferior and ashamed of himself is an awful thing to do. if the roles were reversed and edward had done that to bella, everyone would call him a jerk. bella is too judgmental for my taste. her behavior is not cute or quirky, it's rude and hurtful. meh. this edward is awesome and too good for bella, imo.
| Guest chapter 3 . 11/9/2013
lawd. bella is an idiot! and she seems very superficial and immature for her age. she's not THAT young, so her behavior is more embarrassing than cute. also, it makes me question why edward would be interested in her. he doesn't seem the superficial type, so it can't be just her looks... hmm. we'll see.
| Guest chapter 2 . 11/9/2013
yeah, i love this edward. he's a sweetheart. but his kind manner kinda makes bella look like an huge bitch. was that intentional? lol
| GraceisDee chapter 8 . 11/9/2013
Bella kinda reminds me of Jennifer Lawrence here! xx
| zeeber chapter 12 . 11/2/2013
Loved it...thank you for sharing your words...Brenda