|Reviews for On the Outside|
| nikie chapter 3 . 8/14/2014
nice story but when edda was born she has blonde hair and brown eyes. but when she became an adult she had brown hair and blue eyes. I enjoyed reading your stories.
| Wolvenlights chapter 3 . 3/28/2014
GAH! I seriously thought Thor was going to beat Steve within an inch of his life! XD Kinda glad he didn't , but all the same I was expecting him to at least punch him. Either way, it was a fantastic story and I LOVED the outcome! _ Well Done!
| Wolvenlights chapter 2 . 3/27/2014
I think...I think I hate Steve now...because Damn him! He broke poor Jane!
| Wolvenlights chapter 1 . 3/27/2014
OMG I"M Crying! Whaaa!*grabs a pillow and bawls*
| aoife7 chapter 3 . 12/3/2013
I just loved both of your stories! I look forward to reading more of you work. Thank you for taking the time to share your talent with us.
| TheSweetAngel18 chapter 3 . 11/21/2013
bravo...well done. wish there was more to say on it but this was just that, well done. short but sweet, and yet not too short.
| Beautiful Evil chapter 3 . 11/20/2013
This was a fantastic story!
| Mie779 chapter 3 . 8/18/2013
yes there sure is some new material for further stories... loved this one just as much as the first story... very well written, and you write their emotions perfectly...
One thing... you once wrote Edda to have blue eyes... a tiny mistake...
would love to see more from you...
| Bubbles of Colours chapter 3 . 8/18/2013
I loooved your fic! Thank you so much for writing the sequel!
| Emi-Stella chapter 3 . 10/30/2012
I am but a single reader, but may I put out a plea for another installment? I'll even be your beta, if you'd like (I'm no English major, but I do copyedit for my university newspaper). I've become quite attached to this series... Just finished Inbetween earlier today, and had to continue. I may be forced to write my own subfic about it in the moments between class!
| Jade R. Rayne chapter 3 . 8/15/2012
Ohhh! It was so cute! 3 Hail Thor!
| BloodRose101 chapter 3 . 7/2/2012
That was beautifully done. Great job and thanks for sharing such an amazing story with the rest of us Thor fans... much appreciation. Wonderfully done thanks again looking forward to more stories from you!
| Guest chapter 3 . 6/30/2012
ok make up your mind what color are the princesses eyes in on sentence they are blue in the next hazel and when she was born she had brown eyes and blond hair... other than that i loved the story :)
| Lovin S.W.L chapter 3 . 6/26/2012
Please don't tell me it's all over!
| rose chapter 3 . 6/25/2012
I was soooo happy that you made this sequal. I loved the ending it was PERFECT!. I would love to know about steve and darcy, Hal & Edda etc. I Hope you continue to write about this series ! Thank you again !