Reviews for Of Kings and Queens |
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![]() ![]() Draco is so annoying here,always complaining about taking care of her,,do it or don't do it there's no need for all the unnecessary whining ffs annoying freak |
![]() ![]() ![]() love this fic. |
![]() ![]() Hermione is fucking annoying in this fic |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the character development so far. I do have to mention though that typically overdose on straight opiates doesn't induce seizures. The person stops breathing and suffocates. Of course drug dealers aren't known to be reputable individuals and often mix other crap in there that does cause seizures. If she got her stuff from a pharmacy that reaction would be unlikely. Seizures are great dramatic material though. That's why Hollywood uses them a lot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Color med f*cking impressed! I have (uknowingly) read quite a few of your stories and went completely starstruck when I found out that many of my favs were written by The same author. The stories and mannerism of the characters are intriguing in such different ways that I just missed that they were created from The same mind. Excellent language (english is not my native tounge, but you make it easy) and awesome plots. Please never stop writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this fic. Fun, engaging, and real. Very well written. |
![]() ![]() ![]() we need more Draco stories like this that is less toxic. well done to the writer! |
![]() ![]() This was great! I loved every word of it. Equal amount of great plot and humor! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello there! A really nice story you wrote. I like it, you broached the issue of addiction. It is a very important matter, that often is abandoned. I am very sorry, you lost a good friend to this shite. *hug* I myself had some issues with in advice of the doctor prescribed antidepressivas and stopped taking them because of the rather depressing side effects (ironically). The feeling if nausea and headaches and the shakiness and hurting of the whole body (luckily only for two days) where most negativly breathtaking. I really feared, I might die lying on the stupid to short couch. That was really shit. Hopefully I'll never have to live through this again. So I can absolutely feel, what Hermione went through, even when I "only" had to fight the physical sympthoms of the withdrawel. Stupid pills! Stupid doctor! End of the story: I have a broken thyroid and just need some hormons to balance out my mind... *facepalm* So I really like the story! Wanna read mor of you :D The only thing, I might suggest, is the fact, that you let them mistly mention Jesus Christ and God; in the books it is always Merlin or an bodypart or clothing of him, sometimes an other ancient magician person like Circe or Paracelsus. ;) That's the only thing I stumbled over somewhat. Hopefully my words make sense (I'm reading much in english, but am not a native english speaking person, so maybe some of my phrasing or words may be strange) Hugs and greetings! Anomoly |
![]() ![]() love author trauma dumping in the author's notes |
![]() ![]() I was hoping this fic didn't turn into a magoc addiction fix it :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh I just love the Malfoys in this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm actually so glad you gave a reason for Ron being OOC. Well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVE how you write Narcissa here! |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVE that Harry so strongly sided with hermione in this fic. Too often in dramione fics does the harry x hermione friendship get desecrated |