Reviews for Does Lightning Strike Twice?
Guest chapter 7 . 2/21/2014
I don't know but it seems to me that you have Rick being a little to accepting of her 3 yr. absence, because in the end all she had to do was go back to NY once the ferver died down.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/21/2014
If I was Castle and found out Beckett had pulled this crap, I would use all my money and influence to take my kid back.
scorpio38457 chapter 15 . 7/11/2013
Holyy Frelling schiake. You even brought Harry Dresden into the mix. You are awsome! It sounds like he's a bad guy now but i'm gonna keep reading maybe i'm jumping to conclusions. This might be to much awsome for my head to contain lol
OCMichael chapter 83 . 5/11/2013
MsZola chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
This is a genius story line:D Only 82 chapters left to go ;)
Shutterbug5269 chapter 83 . 9/8/2012
I think an epilogue is in order.

Chkgun93 chapter 83 . 9/8/2012
Wow what an awesome ending, ya done a great job with this and left it with a cliff hanger eh?

I look forward to more of your writings, thanks for a great story, really enjoyed your imagination.

Again Thank You.
Shutterbug5269 chapter 82 . 9/8/2012
Already given my opinion about the whole intersect thing.
Shutterbug5269 chapter 81 . 9/8/2012
A three year old with firearms?

No range master I am familiar with would even allow a three year old onto a range.

Sorry but I think you're pushing what adults would allow a child to do to the breaking point.
Shutterbug5269 chapter 80 . 9/8/2012
A bit hard to follow here. Holly really should not be faring so well against seasoned field agents and cops. You might want to keep that in mind.
Shutterbug5269 chapter 79 . 9/8/2012
I like scenes between Holly, Carina and Ducky/Ilya here.
Shutterbug5269 chapter 78 . 9/8/2012
Isn't Jesse a little OLD for Alexis?
Shutterbug5269 chapter 77 . 9/8/2012
More nice family fluff, but I think you are trying a little to hard to make everybody inter-related.
Shutterbug5269 chapter 76 . 9/8/2012
Some nice family fluff here.
Shutterbug5269 chapter 75 . 9/8/2012
Had a bit of trouble following the plot here.
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