Reviews for Last One Standing
Helena Dax chapter 1 . 8/27/2014
LOL, great, it made me smile XD
Clara Brighet chapter 1 . 5/8/2014
Oh that was funny! XD And very well written, too. Congratulations! Haha just the idea that the FBI would have an 'Intra-Agency Water Pistol Championship' cracks me up. x)
Thank you for writing this!
- Clara Brighet
IWannaLightsaber chapter 1 . 12/10/2013
LOL That was really scary for a sec. ANd then I was shocked (nice move putting the prompt at the end...) So I had to go back and read it over again. And it made me laugh. :) Thanks and great job!
reader82 chapter 1 . 10/10/2013
Great Story. What an unexpected turn. Amazing.
HighOnAWindyHill chapter 1 . 5/5/2013
Hahaa that's brilliant lol! Soo clever! You did a really fantastic job with this:D Did not see that one coming! Definitely made me smile! :)
Guest chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
Great story!
Guest chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
Haha :)
Guest chapter 1 . 9/12/2012
That was brilliant! And yes, it definitely made me smile! :)
Bonkers4Reid chapter 1 . 8/1/2012
Wow! That was impressive! I was like "what has Neal done?" then "why does he have a gun?" Great job at keeping readers guessing! Bravo.
hannahsmetana chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
Brilliant! Really fun, clever twist.
Arches67 chapter 1 . 7/1/2012
funny :-)
puellascribit5 chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
Haha, wasn't expecting that! Great job. ;)
Miran Anders chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
Nice! Had me really wondering there, for a moment - and I loved the resolve. Nicely done!


Fierce Queen chapter 1 . 6/18/2012
Wow! I didn't expect that! You had me going for a minute ;) Good job!


EpikalStorms chapter 1 . 6/18/2012
Yeah, it made me smile. I take it the FBI agencies are all-round serious about Water Pistol Tournaments, huh?
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