|Reviews for The Lucky Ones|
| MayaStormborn chapter 3 . 10/23/2013
Please tell me you're coming back to this! It's brilliant so far
| Sakurazero chapter 3 . 7/28/2013
Just the right amount of fluff and humor. It couldn't have been a reunion between Thor and Jane without him getting run over. Such romance between the two couples. :)
| Sakurazero chapter 2 . 7/28/2013
I don't think it was a good idea to let the boys handle the birthday party butbut it makes for a good laugh. I love all the girls from the Marvel series they're all awesome! It was also a mistake for the girls to let Tony drive. I have a feeling by the end of this fiasco that those 5 girls will be the best of friends and have all of the men under their command. Good luck boys.
| PepperOny Fan chapter 3 . 7/18/2013
I love it. More. Please?
| hipstahamsta3 chapter 3 . 7/16/2013
I think there should be some Clintasha
| SavingViolets chapter 3 . 5/29/2013
I know you haven't updated in nearly a year, but this is actually a great story. It's very funny and very sweet, and I definitely think you should continue with it. So I'm gonna be optimistic and go ahead and follow it aanyway.
| Avalon West chapter 3 . 5/24/2013
This was a good amount of fluff. It was short, sweet, and to the point. Great story! :)
| ym4yum1 chapter 3 . 3/18/2013
Ok, too silly, OOC... And funny! LOL!
We all need laugh dear! Thanks! Keep writing!
Ah, and I agree! More Steve and Maria, please!
| kogouma chapter 3 . 1/16/2013
' "I knew it was him." She sniffed, looking up at them. "I could tell by the way the car jerked." '
that was sweet and so Jane. and man, Thor and cars do not mix. its like they're mortal enemies and thor doesn't know it xD
this is amazing! i love it so much! it has me smiling and laughing the whole way through. update soon! :D
| kogouma chapter 1 . 1/16/2013
pfffft, oh god...i can't stop laughing! this was so funny! and that little quip Bruce made 'Well there goes our Pretty Princess theme.' made me lose it xD
| Guest chapter 3 . 10/19/2012
are you ever gonna continue this story?
| sabaku no nathzu uchiha chapter 3 . 8/12/2012
Why thor is always hit by a car with Dr. Foster on it! jajajaja
Love the clint obssesion with the bouncey castle ans strippers
| sabaku no nathzu uchiha chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
Oh my god! Who puts a man out of time and an asgardian to plan a birthdayparty! hillarious!
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/31/2012
update and more Steve and Maria
| Wonderwomanbatmanfan chapter 3 . 7/30/2012
This was too funny lol. Please update soon :D