|Reviews for Untouchable|
| Guest chapter 2 . 5/21/2014
plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz! Right more! this is so good and no character breaks, also i love how the story isn't going to fast. It is just amazing!
| MissDarkness101 chapter 2 . 10/23/2013
I like it !
| vishous21 chapter 1 . 4/14/2013
this is so amazing
| emilyfridaythe13th chapter 2 . 3/10/2013
u should write more
| Dance Elle Dance chapter 2 . 12/19/2012
Wonderful fic. I love the original and am very excited to see what you do here. Hope to read more soon!
| SexyStardust chapter 2 . 11/16/2012
I eagerly await my chicken enchilada soup I have on the stove. The aroma is pure mouthwatering. Please update soon! Love it so far (:
| Slyly chapter 2 . 10/22/2012
:O Update soon. This is written beautifully, and I think you have Jason's personality in the right.
| BrilliantRed22 chapter 2 . 9/16/2012
| kcrb0202 chapter 2 . 8/12/2012
| doctor anthony chapter 2 . 8/6/2012
Fantastic work here my friend as always. Keep up the great work.
| ThePhantomismyLove chapter 2 . 8/6/2012
| WastelandGhouls chapter 1 . 8/5/2012
This was great. But I'm confused. The story is already up and in full, but on another account?
| SimCityLlamas chapter 2 . 8/4/2012
Just. . . JCODWSNBFKEDSOJ. Oh my Jashin, I frikin' love this story.
I can't wait (well, I could wait!) for the next chapter! I know it'll be great :DD
And it'll make me giggle like mad.
| xxKhaleesixx chapter 2 . 8/4/2012
Uh oh, Avril you've just put yourself in a world of trouble!
| kopycat101 chapter 2 . 8/4/2012
That was INTENSE! 8O
I'm surprised that Danny never fainted from the pain and bloodloss...