|Reviews for Asunder|
| meadow11 chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
poor bella :(
| KristenLynn chapter 6 . 6/24/2012
Saw this story rec'd on E'ville a day or two agao and tagged it. So glad I did. I've been in a bit of a fic funk lately, never finding anything that I can stick with. I had tears in my eyes by ch2 here, and just had to keep reading quickly to see what happened. I loved the raw (and very, very real) emotion here... all the insecurity, especially about the future. As someone who wasn't sure what would happen when I was rejected from my preferred grad program, I know exactly how Bella felt. Luckily, I got into a different program, and came as a post-doc to the Institution where I was rejected as a potential grad student.
Life comes full circle, and I ccan only imagine the wonderful things that this ExB have in store for their future.
Thanks for a quick and very enjoyable read.
| UnxpctdDelirium chapter 6 . 6/24/2012
| duskwatcher2153 chapter 6 . 6/23/2012
So glad to see you're writing again!
Sweet, realistic, lovely.
So refreshing to see Tanya in a positive light.
| americnxidiot chapter 6 . 6/23/2012
aw this is very sweet.
| Kgunter34 chapter 6 . 6/23/2012
I enjoyed reading this. Good job!
| Twiggalina chapter 6 . 6/23/2012
I really enjoyed this short story!
| ImHereToReview chapter 6 . 6/23/2012
How sweet was that? So Edward was worried about Bella not coming with him to NY just as much as she was. Silly lovers. Glad everyone kissed and made up. Can't wait to see what you do next!
| souplover9 chapter 6 . 6/23/2012
This was really sweet, not at all what I was expecting. I was thinking it would be more drama filled, with some angst.
Thanks for sharing.
| Lorna jones chapter 6 . 6/23/2012
I really love the ending this was perfect I thought they were going to break up didn't have enough faith in poor Edward will miss waiting for the new chapters everyday xx
| roon0 chapter 6 . 6/23/2012
That was really cute. I am so glad her day got better. Thank you for sharing. :)
| roon0 chapter 5 . 6/23/2012
At last Bella is having fun. Awesome chapter.
| FFFan1664 chapter 6 . 6/23/2012
I really enjoyed that. I love that all the angst and insecurities were resolved so quickly. It makes a nice change - I hate it when things drag on and it makes everything worse.
Thanks for sharing your story,
| Capricorn75 chapter 6 . 6/22/2012
I totally loved it, Ruby. It was realistic and relatable- which I always crave in a fic! I'm also super excited that you're going to posting more fics soon.
| Marie One chapter 6 . 6/22/2012
Nice story and yes weddings are depressing sometimes at least for me.