Reviews for Asunder
ol2bob chapter 4 . 6/26/2012
ack.. communication, people! I'm glad they got a sweet moment in.I feel like her reaction to Tanya has more to do with her insecurities than Tanya actually doing anything,...
ol2bob chapter 2 . 6/26/2012
figures.. now that you've completed the story, I don't have time to read it!

Poor Bella... Things are not looking good.. even if it seems like she's over-analyzing every little detail...
WTF.Am.I.Doing chapter 6 . 6/26/2012
I like how Bella's kind of come full circle in a way - she's found some perspective and maybe a new career direction, she's sorted things out with Edward - realized he wants her and only her no matter what. Which is really a nice ending for great fic. Thanks for sharing!

W
WTF.Am.I.Doing chapter 5 . 6/26/2012
No wedding (or any get-together involving females and alcohol really) would be complete without a bathroom confessional to make everything right with the world again! I really like this Tanya, she's honest and down to earth (which is really nice, but rare to see in a fic) and a good friend for Bella.

W :)
WTF.Am.I.Doing chapter 4 . 6/25/2012
It's nice to see Edward's paying a little attention to Bella and complimenting her. And I really don't think she has anything to worry about with Tanya, but I think she's so down at the moment that I don't think she see Tanya for what she is, just a friend to Edward and possibly her as well.

Thanks for sharing.

W
Saguenay chapter 6 . 6/24/2012
Great story. I stressed all along waiting for Edward to leave Bella or something like that. Finally it ended perfectly with Edward loving Bella.

Thanks for sharing your work.
meadow11 chapter 6 . 6/24/2012
yay! so happy they finally talked. looks like things will work out just fine- thanks for sharing!
meadow11 chapter 5 . 6/24/2012
things seem to be looking up!
meadow11 chapter 4 . 6/24/2012
yeah- it would be hard to not be jealous of tanya.
meadow11 chapter 3 . 6/24/2012
:(
meadow11 chapter 2 . 6/24/2012
oooohhhh... not good! not good at all - poor Bella :(
meadow11 chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
poor bella :(
KristenLynn chapter 6 . 6/24/2012
Aw...

Saw this story rec'd on E'ville a day or two agao and tagged it. So glad I did. I've been in a bit of a fic funk lately, never finding anything that I can stick with. I had tears in my eyes by ch2 here, and just had to keep reading quickly to see what happened. I loved the raw (and very, very real) emotion here... all the insecurity, especially about the future. As someone who wasn't sure what would happen when I was rejected from my preferred grad program, I know exactly how Bella felt. Luckily, I got into a different program, and came as a post-doc to the Institution where I was rejected as a potential grad student.

Life comes full circle, and I ccan only imagine the wonderful things that this ExB have in store for their future.

Thanks for a quick and very enjoyable read.

:)

KL
UnxpctdDelirium chapter 6 . 6/24/2012
Loved it!
duskwatcher2153 chapter 6 . 6/23/2012
So glad to see you're writing again!

Sweet, realistic, lovely.

So refreshing to see Tanya in a positive light.

Great work!
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