Reviews for Asunder
mirrorlight31 chapter 2 . 6/27/2012
oh my! Poor bella! another great chapter!
mirrorlight31 chapter 1 . 6/27/2012
I love stories like this...where one of the characters doesn't have a clue. Great job on the first chapter!
Scorpio11 chapter 6 . 6/26/2012
I'm so glad I decided to finish this story. I was annoyed with Bella, even if I understood, and wasn't sure if I wanted to put up with her anymore. She redeemed herself, however, as did Edward. I really grew to love Tanya and even Rosalie. Great job.
ol2bob chapter 4 . 6/26/2012
ack.. communication, people! I'm glad they got a sweet moment in.I feel like her reaction to Tanya has more to do with her insecurities than Tanya actually doing anything,...
ol2bob chapter 2 . 6/26/2012
figures.. now that you've completed the story, I don't have time to read it!

Poor Bella... Things are not looking good.. even if it seems like she's over-analyzing every little detail...
WTF.Am.I.Doing chapter 6 . 6/26/2012
I like how Bella's kind of come full circle in a way - she's found some perspective and maybe a new career direction, she's sorted things out with Edward - realized he wants her and only her no matter what. Which is really a nice ending for great fic. Thanks for sharing!

WTF.Am.I.Doing chapter 5 . 6/26/2012
No wedding (or any get-together involving females and alcohol really) would be complete without a bathroom confessional to make everything right with the world again! I really like this Tanya, she's honest and down to earth (which is really nice, but rare to see in a fic) and a good friend for Bella.

W :)
WTF.Am.I.Doing chapter 4 . 6/25/2012
It's nice to see Edward's paying a little attention to Bella and complimenting her. And I really don't think she has anything to worry about with Tanya, but I think she's so down at the moment that I don't think she see Tanya for what she is, just a friend to Edward and possibly her as well.

Thanks for sharing.

Saguenay chapter 6 . 6/24/2012
Great story. I stressed all along waiting for Edward to leave Bella or something like that. Finally it ended perfectly with Edward loving Bella.

Thanks for sharing your work.
meadow11 chapter 6 . 6/24/2012
yay! so happy they finally talked. looks like things will work out just fine- thanks for sharing!
meadow11 chapter 5 . 6/24/2012
things seem to be looking up!
meadow11 chapter 4 . 6/24/2012
yeah- it would be hard to not be jealous of tanya.
meadow11 chapter 3 . 6/24/2012
meadow11 chapter 2 . 6/24/2012
oooohhhh... not good! not good at all - poor Bella :(
meadow11 chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
poor bella :(
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