|Reviews for Asunder|
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/19/2012
Wow. I gotta say, Edward is coming off as a real tool. I hope he has a redeeming moment soon, because at the moment I can just see him trying to turn Bella into a Stepford Wife. Frankly, if I were her I'd have no problem telling them where they can stick their glitz and glamour.
| Cullenosopy chapter 2 . 6/19/2012
That was rather painful and embarrassing. To read, and for poor Bella. Something tells me it is going to get worse before it gets better.
| Consultant by Day chapter 1 . 6/18/2012
Wow! 2 in less than 24 hours - yippee! I have to say my heart was just breaking for her. You set up some great tension there, with just enough ambiguity about Bella's sensitivity (or Edward's lack of it) to keep us guessing. The only thing that rang a bit false was the idea of his father putting away hard-earned money; it sounded sort of odd in the context of all the opulence you referred to in the rest of the chapter. But that is a minor thing. I definitely am looking forward to reading more!
| miaokuancha chapter 1 . 6/18/2012
Uh oh. This doesn't bode well ...
| roon0 chapter 1 . 6/18/2012
Bella is not having a good day of it. I look forward to reading more.
| Scorpio11 chapter 1 . 6/18/2012
Poor Bella. She's not having a good day, and Edward's not helping matters. I know that's unfair since he doesn't know anything is wrong, and he has a lot going on with Emmett's wedding.
| ol2bob chapter 1 . 6/18/2012
Sorry for the excessively challenging prompt... but so far it's promising!
| Capricorn75 chapter 1 . 6/18/2012
Okay, insert that David at the Dentist "Is this real life?" gif here.
Because o-m-g, not just yesterday's amazing one-shot but an actual ficlet from you as well?
This is so awesome! I'm really feeling for Bella in this chapter- I think I would have just packed it in and headed back home, lol!
| WTF.Am.I.Doing chapter 1 . 6/18/2012
Great first chapter! I really feel bad for Bella and I want to say Edward's being a dick, but I don't know if I can. Because I'm not sure if the way he's behaving is normal for their relationship and Bella's reacting because of the bad news she's received or if the bad news she's received is now showing up underlying issues in their relationship that she hasn't noticed until now. (I'm not sure if that actually makes any sense lol) I guess we'll find out. Either way she needs to talk to him.
I really like fic's where B and E are in an established relationship, they're hard to come by, so I'm really looking forward to seeing where this goes.
| Kgunter34 chapter 1 . 6/18/2012
Great 1st chapter. Can't wait for tomorrow.