|Reviews for Twilight's Cinderella Story|
| Midna Isabella Miyamoto chapter 1 . 9/14/2013
MIDLINK FOREVER This is a very original Cinderella story too.
| mabecky13 chapter 1 . 11/29/2012
could you add what the book said about link
| The Faery Maid chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
This is a sweet little fairy tale and since I've enjoyed the many retellings of Cinderella, I had to check this one out! The stepsisters and stepmother are, as usual, nasty to the core and Midna is a fine heroine. What a different twist not to have her run away from the ball! I must say, though, that your tale reminded me of my own Zelda/Cinderella story...
Now, just for a couple of tips. First, I suggest that you make more paragraphs. Having a wall of text with few breaks is not an easy thing to read. Second, perhaps you could use a spellchecker to catch mistakes, or ask someone to proofread. Most of all, continue writing; it is the only way to improve!
| xD NaruSasuNaru chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
| draco122 chapter 1 . 6/20/2012
i have never seen a story of cinderella were she does not run off afterwards. I love that twist. Anyway a nice job and i bow to your skills. It was different and i liked that. Overall very good. However having the passages so close togerther made it harder to read. Other then that it was great.