Reviews for fault lines
TeddyRemusPotter chapter 1 . 2/11/2014
Oh, this is brilliant! Love this way of getting together ...
sydneysages chapter 1 . 1/24/2013
Kaye, oh my god, this is brilliant, I'm truly loving this and how you write TeddyVic. I know it's not your otp or anything, but WOW i am impressed. i loved the different sections and how you characterised them and how they never really had a conversation before they met up.

and them in the last section, with victoire's last line, wow i'm in love.
all these ghost towns chapter 1 . 8/25/2012
I always think of all these great things I'm going to say when reading fic regarding my review, and then, I always forget them in light of how astounded I am with the overall thing.


That being said, I'm failing enormously here, but, this is gorgeous.

Just beautiful. And painful and lovely and oh. Amazing.
how to forget chapter 1 . 7/27/2012
ok, ok - how do i start?

i'm really glad i found your account because i'm already in love with your writing and going to enjoy reading your stories. anyway, onto the actual chapter.

(and btw, i just have to tell you that you have to finish this collection because all your otps are most of MY otps and i need you to write them because i know you'll do it fantastically)

i loved this. victoire/teddy is one the few pairings i don't like much, because they're usually really cliché/too easy for my liking, but if were written more like THIS i'd think i would have fallen in love with the pairing almost as much as teddy/lily.

i love the unique way you've written victoire, really. it's very refreshing and i just love it. i love how you said she looked terrible, instead of always so amazingly beautiful, in the beginning.

i don't have much to say other than i hope you keep writing, because i really can't wait!
folie a plusieurs chapter 1 . 7/10/2012
Okay, I have to just say before I say anything else: I loveloveadore your Victoire. She's so different from what I'm used to seeing as Vic and I've always seen VictoireTeddy as kind of an over-done, horribly fluffy, cliched type of couple who are always best friends that fall in love in every story. This story was different and I love you for that.

It was amazing and sad and romantic and sweet and I just felt so badly for both Teddy and Victoire and found myself wanting nothing more than to shove their faces together and say "now kiss."

It's funny too, because I don't ship TeddyVictoire. Not at all. Not even a little. It was always too plain for my taste, but you really just spiced it up. Your writing is so amazing, I hope you realize. You've got a real way with words.

I cannot wait to read the next chapters! Update soon, please! xx
autumn midnights chapter 1 . 6/21/2012
Aww, I really liked this! And this is coming from somebody who absolutely despises Teddy/Victoire. The way you wrote them here is so original. Most people put them as being BFFs through childhood, friendship that gradually develops into a romance, but what you have here is a really creative, well-thought out version of their relationship. I've never considered them having this rivalry through childhood - even though I hate the pairing, I always imagined them as good friends - but I really enjoy the idea of it. Your characterizations of both of them are excellent, also - they're both so flawed and imperfect, and they just fit really well together. I've never read a fic where the main characters meet at a funeral, either, lol. Overall, I think you did a lovely job on this, and I'm alerting it as well. Can't wait for future chapters!
verity candor chapter 1 . 6/21/2012
Phew- it took me a few tries to review this properly. It's really a suckerpunch, isn't it? You've got such power and movement in your characters, and especially Victoire here - so conflicted and guarded and so mercurial - I loved seeing her through Teddy's eyes, and watching him try so hard to keep himself away from him made it thatuch easier to believe they would work well together. I also thought the twist in the end was lovely - since this is Teddy's viewpoint, it makes sense that we don't see that Victoire has been going through the same crisis as he has and asfhdodkajsfksks I could just go on about this okay? There are so many great touches - the funeral in the beginning, Victoire's flat - and I honestly thinkthis is one of the beat views of TeddyVictoire I have read. Great job.
waterlit chapter 1 . 6/20/2012
This was sad at times - but imo you described Teddy and Victoire's loneliness really well! (:
coffee-stained lips chapter 1 . 6/19/2012


seriously, though, babe, this is flawless. i adore your writing, first off, but not reading it in awhile just makes it more astoundingly good when i come back to it. this is a very good, very awesome victoire/teddy, and i'm anxiously awaiting the lysander/dominique promised for the next chapter ;)
Forever Written in the Stars chapter 1 . 6/18/2012
I really liked this, mostly because it was so different from the fluffy, BFF-turned-lovers Teddy/Victoire most people write. It's gritty and unique. I really enjoyed this.
marniemadden chapter 1 . 6/18/2012
i really, really enjoyed this! i like teddy/victoire generally, i mean, i change my otps every five seconds but i tend to like teddy/victoire. problem is, there aren't many good fics about them. this was absolutely one of them!

i can't think of anything to fault this. it was perfect.

looking forward to dominique/lysander because they're like one of my ultimate nextgen otps :D