I am generally treating these inaccuracies as AU content for the record. Which is why im still reading. Im not pointing this out the flaws to be a hater or something.

I see what you sere going for here with Sasukes eyes, but the Sharingan would be able to distinguish between a chakra constructthe mist) and its user (Zabuza). I get the logic of Zabuza hiding in a cloud of his own chakra.
But by that logic every shinobi couod hide behind their jutsu against a Sharingan user, which is simply not the case. Sasuke wouldnt have been able to see the microscopic bombs in Deidaras C0 attack for example.

This is really late and you may have improved far beyond this by now, if you still write. But you are too quick to go for dramatics over actual characterization. shikamaru turning on after Sasuke so violently after stating he believes him earlier is simply weird.

Even if he had doubts, having them expressed in this way by Shikamaru comes off bery strange.

Will there be an update to the story, or has it been discontinued?

This is one of the best fanfictions I’ve ever read. Love that Naruto and Sasuke are brothers. And that each character feels like their own person instead of being pushed to the side. Please continue this story it is so good!

pls update!

I hope some day you choose to finish this story, or at east post an outline of how you see it ending. I’ve enjoyed it up to this point.

I just ran across your account and am binge reading the story. You asked for clichés so I have a good one that I haven’t seen too often so it’s a bit of a cliché, but it’s also a bit of an original cliché you know Denzo runs root, what if because they don’t understand social cues they misunderstand him complaining about the lack of training the kyuubi container gets? And so they will undertake training him on the sly to where he has great capability, but with the wheel of fire and a prankster sense of humor!

I know that we're unlikely to get an update to this and that it's likely not only abandoned but that it's probably been led around the back and shot like a lame horse, but I'm still gonna keep it open in a tab because this is one of my favourite time travel fics, and I sincerely hope you come back at some point, if only just to finish the chuunin exams.
I love every single fucking character (Rock Lee and Fuu were a little ehh, but still enjoyable, got a cheap chuckle out of me at the very least), and as far as Im convinced, this is how time travel Sasuke and Naruto should act in everu fic, these are the true main cast for this kind of story for me

But even if not, I wish you luck on your future endeavours and stories.

I hope you're still checking these reviews

Awesomeeeee

The heck happened.

Ooooo interesting... Sasuke's mindscape must look so awesome if it was drawn! I could already imagine it! Also, nice to see some more of Kurama and Sasuke getting along

Awesome chappy

This is really great tbh

Love it! Some light shed on Shika and Shino!