|Reviews for Walking Backwards on a Tightrope|
| Child of Dreams chapter 18 . 9/14
I thought Naruto was the Nanadaime Hokage?
Or is this an alternate future where Kakash wasn't elected as temporary Hokage after Pein's attack on Konoha put Tsunade in that coma?
| Child of Dreams chapter 17 . 9/14
Kakashi time-traveled too?
Or did you mean Shikaku?
| Username6166 chapter 35 . 6/9
So you copy-pasted Corvo from Dishonored but made him cringy and generic
| Vishw chapter 41 . 5/4
You know how ridiculous it was that all the while Naruto was attacking the Kusa team, then chatting with Neji, then knocking him out, Hinata was on Naruto's back as if she is a little kid or a pet monkey or something! Couldn't Naruto have put her down before attacking or she herself might have gotten down instead of clinging to him like that?! She's supposed to be a Kunoichi, not someone he's supposed to coddle all the time. Meh! I haven't really enjoyed the way the writer has been portraying NaruHina since the start... which is unfortunate cause this is one of the better Naruto time-travel fics I've read...
Also, why is nobody questioning who made Naruto boss?! Someone like Ino would never take his orders quietly unless Shikamaru has somehow managed to convince her. If that's the case, the writer has forgotten to tell us. Same problem with nobody (except Sakura maybe) questioning them about their super skills and secret keeping...
As I said, this is rather a well-written story, but things like these kinda dampen the enjoyment somewhat.
| Vishw chapter 36 . 5/4
So are they still gonna refuse to reveal their secrets to other genin after all they just witnessed? If yes then I'm gonna be disappointed...
| Vishw chapter 35 . 5/4
I'm losing interest because of this Dishonored fella. Akatsuki, Madara, Kabuto were enough trouble as it is so why invent another supervillain? And it seems Sasuke hid the Dishonored's skills from Naruto. Why on earth would he do that if he wants to be trusted and redeemed?
| Vishw chapter 32 . 5/4
Weren't NaruHina supposedly lovers in the future? But if that conversation is anything to go by then it seems Naruto never really knew the real Hinata. How ironic it is that he wants her to see the real him when she's one of the few who always did. Shino and Sasuke had to explain her to him like he's the same immature 12 year old he originally was. Poor girl deserves better...
| Vishw chapter 12 . 5/3
Really good story so far. But that scene with Hinata was... bad. Why was Naruto behaving as if he's seen Hinata for the first time after coming back? I mean he's sitting in the same class for days and was supposed to befriend her. Yet it seems he didn't even bother to talk to her and now suddenly acting all familiar! Saying things like "I enjoy talking with you." Since when dude if you never talked to her before? The least the writer could have done was to add a couple of instances where Naruto talked to her before. Only then this scene works.
| Guest chapter 17 . 3/17
realmente bom, sinto falta de hinata, adoro romance.
| Guest chapter 8 . 3/17
kkkk muito divertido
| Guest chapter 6 . 3/17
| Guest chapter 4 . 3/17
kkkkk Se ele era Hokage, ele era o Hokage de Sasuke.
perece uma fic sasunaru...
muito legal até agora
| DigimasterHiro chapter 16 . 2/17
The Star-Rank makes sense in Canon as well, like the situation with Itachi, as you said, but also with the truth of Hiruzen's father, Sasuke Sarutobi. He was one of the most evil clan heads to exist in the Pre-Village Era, to the point that it caused problems with the Sarutobi clans presence in the village, as well as Hiruzen's position as clan head. All memories of Sasuke Sarutobi's actions were erased, other than his combat skill, and only Hiruzen and the man who cast the memory wipe were left to keep the secret.
| rgjflood chapter 45 . 12/4/2022
Man, I’m reading this chapter and I LOVE to see Naruto finally take charge of his subordinates. Love seeing him as homage, so cool
| jaron5 chapter 8 . 10/5/2022
Pffft Kakashi is so dead and done already