|Reviews for Monster Ocs need|
| NaraTara chapter 1 . 4/27/2013
Name: Rei Mitsuri
Type of monster: Werecat
Family: His mom Akane, his dad Hiroshi and his sister Miki.
History: He was born and raised in Japan were he got bullied for being weird, then he moved.
Personality: He is very shy and timid but sweet and caring to his close friends. Very, very polite
Abilities: Very agile and fast
Hair: Messy light brown hair with one brown and one white cat ear sticking out
Skin type: A tiiiiny bit of tan, but very light.
Eyes: Brown eyes with cat pupils
Killer Style: Hoodies, skinny jeans and sneakers, nothing really special.
Freaky Flaw: Whhen someone pulls his tail. He is also very shy and has a hard time talking English.
Favorite Color: Pretty much all of them
Favorite Food: Sushi or anything Japanese. He often makes his own bentos.
Pet Peeves: To noisy people
Likes: He likes to draw and to read
Classes: As many as he has time for, he is good in school except that he has a hard time with english.
Relationship Choice/ Crush: -
Things you want me to know: -
Anything you want to happen: -
| yumadeedoo chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
Still need OCs for this? Yes no maybe so? Well, like I have one:
Name: Elle Gastrucci, but most people call me Ella G
Age: Hmm, not sure
Type of monster: Half-human, half-gazelle ((I have a very interesting story for her))
Family: I don't remember much about my birth mother, but I do have an 'adopted' mother.
History: I don't remember much about where I was born, or who I was born to. I probably have a whole bunch of sisters and brothers. When I was a young calf, I was taken away from my family and eventually experimented on. I don't know if the experiment worked, per say, but I was mutated with human DNA, and the rest... well... you know.
Personality: I'm a little shy at times. I also have a tendency to make a sort of bleating noise when scared or frightened. I sometimes tend to blend in with the crowds, so any potential bullies (werewolves, mainly) won't notice me.
Abilities: I'm an excellent ice skater, though I usually do it in my spare time, when nobody's around. Don't want another thing for people to make fun of me for.
Hair: Long light brown hair with natural black highlights. I also have little miniature horns that stick out the top of my head.
Skin type: Tan skin, with freckles on my cheeks.
Eyes: Dark brown
Killer Style: I like to stay plain, and not draw attention to myself.
Freaky Flaw: If I think I'm in any potential trouble or danger, I drop to the floor and pretend I'm dead. Sometimes I can't even control it; it's just natural instinct.
Favorite Color: All shades of brown. And white.
Favorite Food: I don't have an exact favorite. I am a vegetarian, so I don't eat meats. I'm afraid that I'll come across someone that I may have known when I was littler.
Pet Peeves: People who mock me by making goat noises. If you're going to mock me, at least get the sound right.
Likes: Reading, ice skating
Classes: ((I don't know, make them up))
Relationship Choice/ Crush: Well, I have a little crush on Jackson.
Things you want me to know: Her mom is a retired scientist, and was the one responsible for Elle's mutation.
Anything you want to happen: Elle has to stand up for herself and face some bully or other.
| Coffanilla chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
Name: Nova Slender
Type of monster: Celestial elf/slender girl
Family: slender man and a celestial dark elf
History: she has been known as the daughter of Slenderman due to her pale complexion and teleporting abilities but hasn't made many friends due to her father's reputation. She never knew much about her mother since she passed away web Nova was young though her father married someone else.
Personality: Very shy around boys she likes, she often admires from afar and very hippie like when it comes to reading the stars. Nova enjoys her time with her friends and she isn't that hard to be friends with, though she worries about loosing friends when they find out who her father is.
Abilities: Teleportation, reading the stars, can cause static to devices.
Hair: Long straight white hair with sparkly purple streaks with layered side bangs
Skin type: Smooth white skin
Eyes: deep purple
Killer Style: A red tie that goes over her white dress shirt and she wears a short black shirt with white wedges that have purple sparkles on them.
Freaky Flaw: When she gets around boys she likes, devices around her tend to go staticky due to her shyness.
Favorite Color: constellation Blue
Favorite Food: Ice scream
Pet Peeves: Her father tends to check up on her and when she can't control her static.
Likes: stars, teleporting, bragging about her father's adventures, sparkles that remind her of the stars
Classes: Drama, English, Science (I don't know the classes so help!)
Relationship Choice/ Crush: Heath, And Billy
Things you want me to know: Uh I love those boys and Andy
Anything you want to happen: her choosing which one she likes, whoever you seem to be more fit though I like Billy from what I've read.
| Emma chapter 4 . 1/21/2013
Are you ok? Why are you in pain?
| Emma chapter 1 . 1/21/2013
Name: Jessica Fang
Type of Monster: Were-cat
Family: I have a twin sister name Courtney and i live with my uncle whose name is Derek
History: When me and my little sister Courtney were little our parents drowned and we moved in with our uncle... My uncle has been trying to enroll us at Monster High... He's kinda a teacher their...
Personality: I have a temper and im slightly controlling but i can also be nice and i love to please people
Abilities: Well, i can retract my claws, im really athletic and flexible and i can sneak around, you know blend in with things and hide in the shadows... Derek thinks im a master thief but...
Hair: I have long dirty blonde hair, and i like to dye parts of it different colors
Skin: My fur is pretty light, im a calico so i also have black strips but if that wasn't their it would really look like skin
Eyes: I have yellow cat eyes that i don't like too much, sometimes i put color contacts in so my eyes are blue.
Killer Style: I wear black skinny jeans and converse sneakers.. My ears are pierced and i usually wear a eye liner... I wear a short leather jacket and i have rips all over my clothes... But it isn't anything inappropriate. I also like to have a fedora from time to time.
Freaky Flaw: My temper can get me into trouble sometimes, and im always tripping over my tail, man sometimes i wish i didn't have it! Oh, and im not as smart as my sister... Ya my sister can sometimes be smarter than me, get over it.
Favorite Color: I always has 2 favorite colors. My permanent fav is black (im not goth) and my second changes all the time. You can tell what my new fav is by looking at my shirt
Favorite Food: Sushi, Ribs, Gooey pizza, ice cream, chocolate milk, fish, shrimp, french fries with my fav dip that i make, asian chicken, fried chicken... wait we can only pick our favorite?
Pet Peaves: Bullies and homework... 2 things the whole world could live without
Likes: Sports, reading, using the computer, hot baths, naps in the sun, writing, drawing...
Favorite classes: Its a tie between Monster Literature and Mad Science
Relationship Choice: Ok ill tell you but keep quiet! I kinda have a crush on Riven... Yes now be quiet and dont tell anyone or i will scratch your eyes out! Wait stop!
Things i want to happen: Something to happen between Jessica and Riven
I hope you use Jessica Fang and her family!
| Ryls Guuuurrrrrlllllll chapter 2 . 11/4/2012
Name: Sadie Devilina
Type of monster:Devilina
History:Sadie lived you know where for most of her life. She loved it there. But it was lonely there. She begged her dad until he let her go to Monster High.
Personality: Sweet, kind, caring, smart, fair, fearless, easily offended, and very self conscious
Abilities:Hair turns into fire when she loses her temper, can dance with fire, can make fire dance
Hair:Angular, short bob, red with with gray tints at the end
Skin type:Very tanned
Eyes:Gray with flecks of red
Killer Style:Red and Black tutu dress,sparkly red tights, red flats, and black glovlettes. Small pitch fork, sometimes.
Freaky Flaw:Her hair sometimes turns into fire when my temper flares.
Favorite Color:Red. Duh!
Favorite Food:Flaming hot steak, fries on the side. Yum!
Pet Peeves:When people runaway in terror from her. Just cuz she's the devil's daughter. Geez!
Likes:Hanging out with her friends.
Classes:Home Ick, P.E., Clawcusus, Monster Literature, dance
Relationship Choice/ Crush: Doesn't have either since her dad is way too over protective.
Things you want me to know:Has a bascially no self esteem.
Anything you want to happen:Sadie becomes good friends with Frankie Stein and Frankie makes Sadie feel better about herself.
Age:15(almost 15 1/2)
Type of monster:Dark Angel
Family:THE dark Angel
History: Angelina kept skipping school up in heaven so her parents sent her down to earth hoping it would teach her lesson. In the end when her parents came to come get her, she refused to go back.
Personality:Fierce, doesn't let people in, keeps to herself, bad temper,
Abilities:can fly with her black wings
Hair:wavy,brown, with black highlights
Eyes:green with grey flecks
Killer Style:Shredded black dress, patterned gray tights, grey highheel boots, and sapphire tweetie bird necklace
Freaky Flaw:Wings puff up when she gets too nervous or angry
Favorite Color:Black,hense dark angel
Pet Peeves:When people make fun of my wings. I mean its just part of being a dark angel
Likes:flying around at partys
Classes:Same exact classes as Sadie except for dance
Relationship Choice/ Crush:Doesn't need or want a relationship. Has a HUGE crush on Clawd Wolf
Things you want me to know:Is basically only sweet around Clawd. Only Clawd, Leslie, and Sadie can control her
Anything you want to happen:Becomes friends with Leslie, Clawd, Sadie, and Cleo
Type of monster:Maiden of Darkness
Family:Master of Darkness
History:Lived wit her parents, Misteress of Darkness and Master of Darkness. Then one day when she was 14 her behavior spiraled out of control and she ran away. That's when head mistress found her and told her she knew a place where they could help Leslie.
Personality:Has a horrible temper, helps alot of kids who are being bullied, never gives up, stuborn, sly, clever, sneaky, fierce, fearless
Abilities:she knows stuff about people that they havent told her. She can connect with them. Can understand people right away. Something her parents can't even do
Hair:Messy, black, with red highlights
Killer Style:White lacey cami, black ripped waist coat (sort of),black slit up the side skirt, black patterned tights, dagger choker, and sparklie combat boots
Freaky Flaw:Same thing as her ability.
Favorite Color:Black. It is in the name.
Favorite Food:Pizza! Delicious!
Pet Peeves:When people call her a dark angel. She's a maiden of darknes. Hullo! No wings.
Likes:Hanging wit her besties at a party.
Classes:Same classes as Angelina
Relationship Choice/ Crush:Has a crush on Clawd and Jackson
Things you want me to know:Is nice to Clawd, Jackson, Sadie, and there friends if they want her to.
Anything you want to happen: Starts to get to know Jackson and Clawd. Becomes great friends with Angelina, Sadie,Cleo, Frankie, and basically everybody.
Hope you like! Plz tell me you'll use them.
| Anony mouse101 chapter 4 . 8/12/2012
LIved the first chapter you wrote! Hope you feel batter soon! And here is my oc if you want to use her...
Name: Jynx Stripe
Type Of Monster: werecat
Family: The werecats
She is the adopted younger sister of Toralei Stripe. She looks up to Toralei but doesn't like to be mean like what she does. Her father was accidentally killed in an accident at work (he was a construction worker) and her mother left her at an orphanage when she was 5 with only her birth certificate and a silver four-leafed clover shaped locket (that is stuck shut). She hasn't seen or heard from her since. Then when she turned 13 she was adopted by the Stripe family. She went to, Purrstone prep (creative right ;p ) a werecat only school for 3 years but transferred to monster high because nobody wanted to be around her because she couldn't quite control her powers yet.
She is kind, shy, loyal to her friends and passionate about art. And she sometimes has a wicked temper or gets upset easily.
Normal powers of any standard werecat plus she can sense a person's inner most feelings and brings a bit of bad luck to anyone who crosses her. Warning if her eyes glow that means a bit of bad luck is heading your way!
Hair: black with a white stripe
Skin type: black fur that is soft, glossy, and smooth
Eyes: bright green
Dark green top, dark blue jeans, black sneakers, and her signature lucky silver four-leafed clover locket. (her mom gave it to her before she left)
She gets upset at some of the smaller things in life, and She has the tendency to pounce on almost anything that moves.
Favorite Color: Green
Favorite Food: Tunafish sandwiches and milkshakes!
Being called "bad luck", and being blamed for things she didn't cause. And swearing she can't stand swearing! Loud sudden sounds.
Likes: art especially sculpting and gymnastics.
Fav Classes: Art and Physycal Deaducation
Relationship Choice/ Crush: James Neko, a boy werecat she met at Purrstone prep. He was one of the few friends she had. He is a white werecat with black patches. He transferred to monster high before Jynx (which is another reason why she transferred).
Things you want me to know:
She loves making friends and doesn't hate anyone unless they are mean to her.
Anything you want to happen: nope anything is good with me.
Love your story so far! You are an awesome writer!
| JittaBug chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
Hey-o! If you have any questions feel free to PM me!
Name: Alanis Daryl
Type of Monster: Empousa
Family: Hecate (Mother), the spirit Mormo (Father) (Hecate created Empousae with the spirit Mormo is Greek Mythology)
History: Alanis was created by the Greek Goddess Hecate and the spirit Mormo, who she thinks of as family. She was created by dark magic, like most Empousa. She lives with her mother and father, and usually takes on the form of someone, normal looking.
Personality: Usually bubbly and fun, but when angered, things can get ugly, literally.
Abilities: With her good looks, she can seduce men into liking her, but if they anger her, her skin turns sheet white, her eyes turn bright red, her hair turns into bright orange flames, and her fangs become a little longer than they normally do. She then gets the feeling like she wants to either suck their blood out, or eat their flesh (like in the original Greek myths, Empousa look like beautiful girls, but become ugly when they are angered).
Hair: Blonde, curly hair that falls past her shoulders, with side-swept bangs. Will sometimes wear in a ponytail. When angered, her hair turns into bright orange flames.
Skin type: Light, but when angered (as said before) turns sheet white.
Eyes: Icy blue, but when angered, turn bright red.
Killer Style: Light, white blouse that has a lavender tank top underneath. Pairs with a black pencil skirt and peep toe heels (which are lavender). Wears gold eye shadow and has soft pink lips. Will then normally pair with gold jewelry, and her pendant which usually keeps her anger under control, and glows lavender.
Freaky Flaw: Has MAJOR anger issues. And when they are unleashed, she either wants to eat your flesh, or suck your blood, but it doesn't happen to often.
Favorite Color: Lavender
Favorite Food: Anything low fat (She likes her figure intact)
Pet Peeves: Guys insulting her or her ghoul friends
Classes: Hist. of the Undead, Mad Science, Clawculus, Oceanography, Home Ick, and P.E.
Relationship Choice/Crush: She LOVES blue or green eyes. Doesn't exactly know why, but she just does.
| micalovemonky chapter 2 . 7/29/2012
history:my mom got hooked up with
jackson got her
i am half normie and half monster
personalites:i am smart like jackson
and clumsy like mom
powers:i have super smarts like jackson and i have the same powers
hair:it looks like moms but instead
of black high lights i have yellow
skin:it is the color of jackson but
with stiches are in the
same place as moms.
style:a white skirt up to my knees
with pink thunder bolts,a belly shirt
with a cell phone that says i am a
freaky flaws:emma eletracutes people when she gets over exited
fav food:patato chips
dislikes:i get mad when people think
i am in middle school
fav school thing:fearleading
classes:mad sience and home ick
what u need 2 know:emma talks like
is a A student
eyes:left is yellow and the right is
| nintendgal101 chapter 4 . 7/24/2012
I hope you get better soon. Pain is never fun.
| Just Another Fangirl 6 chapter 4 . 7/24/2012
Hope u get better ;)
| DannyHound chapter 4 . 7/23/2012
Sorry that you are in pain.
| pink penguins chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
Type of monster:Dryad
Family:all of the trees in the forest who are also dryads
History:grew up in the forest and dosen't know a lot about modern stuff but she is still picking it up fast
Personality:she's bubbly and happy and she's also very outgoing
Abilities:to make plants grow
Hair:its light brown with lots of flowers tied in it
Skin type:her skin is a olive tone
Killer Style:her style is like earthy mixed in with rock n roll
Freaky Flaw:her limbs turn into branches at the worst of times
Pet Peeves:when people litter or cut down forests
Classes:home ick,mad science,clawculus ,and history of the undead
Relationship Choice/ Crush:she dosen't have a crush shes friends with everybody
| nintendgal101 chapter 3 . 7/10/2012
What taking so long?
| Nyx'sBlackRose chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
Well, I don't know if you need any more Ocs, but I'll submit one anyways(Sasuke's background is mostly made up of characters from the old cartoon Xaiolin Showdown):
Name: Sasuke Young
Type of monster: Part immortal and part human; the Xaiolin Dragon of Darkness
Family: Chase Young(Father), Lorelei Tao(Mother-another Oc), the other Xaiolin monks(aunt and uncles)
History: Sasuke was born and raised at the Xaiolin Temple, and trained in martial arts and his element by his mother and his aunt and uncles until he was 8; then, Chase took him to live and train at his castle, with an occasional visit to the temple. Sasuke goes to MH because his mother insisted he go to a public school instead of being home schooled by Chase.
Personality: He's a quiet lone wolf on the outside, but when you get to know him, Sasuke is a nice, friendly guy to have around.
Abilities: Mastery of martial arts, speed and strength equal to his father's, limited control over domestic house cats and wild cats(NOT werecats), mastery of his element and elemental attacks and weapons, limited empathy.
Hair: longish black with natural green highlights in places. (You might want to Google Chase to get an idea of what Sasuke looks like.)
Skin Type: Very pale human skin.
Eyes: Orange with black slitted pupils like a cat's; Sasuke keeps them hidden behind a pair of sunglasses most of the time, but they can't do anything like Deuce's can.
Killer Style: Punk and Asian fusion styles in black and bronze.
Freaky Flaw: A temper worse than his father's.
Favorite color: Black and bronze.
Favorite food: His mother's homemade egg rolls.
Pet peeves: Bad music/bad music playing, rude people, stuck-up people, bullies, mean people, loud noises, interruptions when he's in the middle of doing something, bright colors, people picking on his friends.
Likes: Practicing martial arts, good music/good music playing, good people, quiet, visiting his mother and aunt and uncles, dark colors, reading, spending time with his pet panthers, hanging out with his friends.
Classes:Monster Lit A.P., History of the Undead A.P., Mad Science Honors, Dragonometry Honors, P.E., Musical Theory A.P.
Relationship Choice/Crush: Operetta
Things you want me to know: Sasuke has a crush on his best friend, Operetta; He has a pair of pet panthers that his father gave him for his 10th birthday: a male named Set, and a female named Sekhmet;
Sasuke's a smart guy and has grades as good as Ghoulia's; Sasuke plays the guitar, writes his own songs, and sings; despite his musical abilities, he's too shy to go up on stage in front of others and perform.
Anything you want to happen: Sasuke to tell Operetta he likes her and have her like him back; for Set and Sekhmet to follow Sasuke to school one day and get to spend the day with him at school; for Sasuke to join a band and get over his performing fright.