Reviews for Dreams
BlueDiamondStar chapter 1 . 8/20/2013
Adorably heartfelt. Poor Neal, so scared about loosing Peter.
ellesbelles2009 chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
aww, that was awesome
CaskettLover1969 chapter 1 . 7/22/2012
Wow, awesome! Neal's emotions absolutely well written. I'm glad Peter didn't go on that plane! Thanks for the story! Keep writing, I'm a sucker for Peter & Neal!
Twinchy chapter 1 . 6/19/2012
Oh, you broke my heart with this story, Pokey.

Neal was so devastated about the dreams he couldn't even remember because he wanted to keep whatever caused the nightmares from happening. And while Peter was willing to help, he didn't really believe his sleep-deprived CI - and I can surely see why.

This whole thing certainly took a toll on them both, what with the weeks this went on and on, and when Neal finally remembered and told El, she was understandably terrified for her husband.

I really liked the scene with Peter entering Neal's aparment at June's after the accident on the plane. How the younger man had broken things because he felt devastated and miserable about Peter's probable demise and the FBI agent had tried to comfort him. Until they both hugged the stuffing out of each other and cried together. *smiles happily*

Fabulous idea, BTW to have Peter and El invite Neal over and then calling in sick the next day at work, so they could get rib-roaring drunk - the occasion certainly called for it!

LOL at Peter's "didn't notice" speaking about the chaos in Neal's apartment.

Truly well done and thoughtout, Pokey.
peppe1951 chapter 1 . 6/19/2012
Interesting but very moving story
Jo.Rainbow chapter 1 . 6/19/2012
I like this story! Congratulations!
Aragarna chapter 1 . 6/19/2012
Really nice I like it. :-)

Angst with no physical harm, and our boys in full bromance mode, that's the perfect formula.
govgal chapter 1 . 6/18/2012
creepy! reminds me of the Sandra Bullock movie "Premonition"
True Love Lives Forever chapter 1 . 6/18/2012
puage chapter 1 . 6/18/2012
Nice idea. Kind of supernatural!
Miss MaryAnn chapter 1 . 6/18/2012
Very interesting premise. I really loved how each of them needed close physical contact to ground them, to soothe their fear, to comfort eachother.
JeanneZ84 chapter 1 . 6/18/2012
That was so sad but I liked it.