|Reviews for We Will Laugh at Gilded Butterflies|
| Khyharah chapter 18 . 4/21
I have seen this on many people's favorite lists and am so glad I finally gave it a shot. this story is absolutely real and challenges the reader to accept our heroes as flawed individuals with real issues. well done!
| skyblue881 chapter 18 . 4/7
Absolutely beautiful story, and really well written. At first I got a little confused with all the characters' relationships being different, but I'm so glad I kept going. I could really feel for Bella as she went through therapy and dealt with all her inner demons. All of the characters were developed really nicely, and they all felt so real, which I find is quite rare in fics, so really well done to you. The endings of the last two chapters were my absolute favourites, as they really show how people live happier lives because of their flaws, not in spite of them. It's so true - our flaws make us stronger people.
Thank you so much for writing, completing and posting this fic. I have an inkling that I will be coming back to re-read this story whenever I need a fix of fanfiction.
All the best,
P.S: I hope you keep writing!
| Sassyvampmama chapter 18 . 9/12/2015
What a sweet story, thanks for sharing.
| Lilyannenora chapter 1 . 6/15/2015
Ice crème? -_-'
Sorry, I know I'm being annoying but it really doesn't mean anything.
If you wanted to translate Ice cream in French, it would be de la 'crème glacée'. But people usually just say de la 'glace' for short.
Now, I can finally read the next chapter with serenity :)
| Guest chapter 18 . 1/18/2015
I love your story! Sometime it tKes a great story to get a writer back on track.
| jacksperluvr chapter 18 . 1/8/2015
i liked it a lot
| Narisadar chapter 18 . 12/9/2014
OMG. This story is so beautiful. It's perfection. I really love Nick, I think he is just absolutely adorable even though he's 18 now and has a child. I just cannot express how much I love this story, like seriously its beyond perfection, its like mega-perfection or infinite-perfection or something.
| Prettylily22 chapter 18 . 11/15/2014
I really enjoyed this story. The only thing I would suggest you read back over the story and check to see if you choose thecorrect names at the appropriate times.
| AussieGirl16 chapter 18 . 10/7/2014
| twlightbella chapter 18 . 9/22/2014
Emmett and Bella married ,nick is with heather and their son max, Melissa and Lillian twins and five, patrick who is one and half Riley and Bree are remarried and Jason has a little brother named Jackson
| twlightbella chapter 3 . 9/22/2014
Emmett and Bella are falling for each other with Emmett's son Nicholas liking her too
| Twihardder chapter 12 . 9/12/2014
The idea of this story seems good. However, there's too many grammatical errors. It makes it tough to read. There's a huge difference between they're/their/there, your/you're, rode/road. The sentences run too long. Most of the time I can ignore those mistakes. But, not being able to keep up with the correct names/characters in your own story is too hard to ignore. It causes too much confusion.
I love to read stories with Emmett and Bella as a couple. Maybe with a beta, those errors could be corrected. I'd love to come back and try reading again after that.
| LizziePaige chapter 7 . 9/2/2014
Wow, I cannot believe you had Bella let fly with the F word on her first visit to the possible in-laws?! And when were Aro and Bella an item? It makes it seem as if they were together for awhile by the way he's speaking? Or was this all wishful thinking on his behalf?
| LizziePaige chapter 6 . 9/2/2014
Mmmmmm... I'm not sure about Nick always being upset about not having a mother and other kids teasing him. He has never had a mother, since she left almost straight after his birth, so he's never known any difference. Kids at 4 are very understanding, they know that many families are different, single parent families and blended families are the norm these days. I can only gather if this Lance kid is teasing Nick this is something he has learnt from home, which is a shame at that age.
Also, it was not Bella's place to agree like that to Nick's request to be his mother without talking it through thoroughly with Emmett, that all seemed very immature to me. It seems that anything Nick requests she always says yes to without looking ahead to any possible consequences at all.
| LizziePaige chapter 3 . 9/2/2014
Enjoying the story and the actual plot. Emmett and Nick are great characters, will be interested to see where you take this. I'm thinking Mike is a bit of a tool!
I have to say, your writing doesn't always flow and it is quite difficult to read at times though. I'm not adding the following comments to flame, (although I'm sure some may see it as such) but to review the actual writing.
I have to ask, do you have a pre reader or beta? If not I'd suggest you have a good read through each chapter before you post. The reason I query this is that there are obvious spelling and grammar errors, which at time, make it very hard to read. You badly need to add some commas in places, your sentences just run on, and I continually have to go back and read over to ensure I understand what you are saying.
Also... there, their and they're are completely different words which you are getting wrong, sorry but that's just fundamental, which you should pick up on before you post.
Reading on... :)