Reviews for Pack Of Submissives
Guest chapter 11 . 1/5
Seth/ Jacob duh
Guest chapter 1 . 1/5
So will there be a three way pairing with Jacob/Seth/Paul or something
Anita225 chapter 21 . 4/10/2016
Well done! A really good storie.
patoisabel2015 chapter 21 . 1/25/2016
I love your story it was awesome how you developed all of the characters... It's the best thing I have been reading... I love the pack dynamic I enjoyed the plot... Hope you keep writing twilight fics...
Featherfreak chapter 21 . 6/27/2014
I really enjoyed this, a lot of characters to keep track of, but still a good read.
MysonSeth chapter 1 . 5/9/2014
I loved this story!
mamdmc chapter 21 . 2/22/2014
Perfect and beautiful ending. I thoroughly enjoyed this fic. TY for sharing.
mamdmc chapter 20 . 2/22/2014
Seth and Sam were beautiful. Loved their moment.

I guessed Brady was preg. But poor Peter, alone and not knowing what's going on. I hope everything works out for him.
mamdmc chapter 19 . 2/22/2014
Great chapter. I liked everyone's diff POV's. Have to say I agreed with Paul's the most.

Your Jacob is really self destructing and very confused. I hope he finds some piece.
mamdmc chapter 18 . 2/21/2014
I'm having a hard time believing that Carlise and Esme actually approached Seth asking him sacrifice one of the pack for bait and that they asked him not hurt her.
hmmm not sure where this is going.
mamdmc chapter 17 . 2/21/2014
mamdmc chapter 14 . 2/21/2014
holy smoke. tension.
mamdmc chapter 10 . 2/20/2014
Well still lots of choices to be made and I really really hope that Seth choices to be with Sam. At this point in the fic, I think I would be really disappointed if he ended up with Jacob.
mamdmc chapter 8 . 2/20/2014
Wow this is interesting. Great imagination. Can't wait to read more.
mamdmc chapter 6 . 2/19/2014
argh I don't like your Jacob. In previous chapters I was hoping that Seth would pick Sam and now I'm really hoping that he does. Let Jake go and imprint on the half breed and leave Seth alone.
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