Reviews for Pack Of Submissives
mamdmc chapter 21 . 2/22
Perfect and beautiful ending. I thoroughly enjoyed this fic. TY for sharing.
mamdmc chapter 20 . 2/22
Seth and Sam were beautiful. Loved their moment.

I guessed Brady was preg. But poor Peter, alone and not knowing what's going on. I hope everything works out for him.
mamdmc chapter 19 . 2/22
Great chapter. I liked everyone's diff POV's. Have to say I agreed with Paul's the most.

Your Jacob is really self destructing and very confused. I hope he finds some piece.
mamdmc chapter 18 . 2/21
I'm having a hard time believing that Carlise and Esme actually approached Seth asking him sacrifice one of the pack for bait and that they asked him not hurt her.
hmmm not sure where this is going.
mamdmc chapter 17 . 2/21
wow
mamdmc chapter 14 . 2/21
holy smoke. tension.
mamdmc chapter 10 . 2/20
Well still lots of choices to be made and I really really hope that Seth choices to be with Sam. At this point in the fic, I think I would be really disappointed if he ended up with Jacob.
mamdmc chapter 8 . 2/20
Wow this is interesting. Great imagination. Can't wait to read more.
mamdmc chapter 6 . 2/19
argh I don't like your Jacob. In previous chapters I was hoping that Seth would pick Sam and now I'm really hoping that he does. Let Jake go and imprint on the half breed and leave Seth alone.
mamdmc chapter 4 . 2/19
I like the strength of your subs.
mamdmc chapter 3 . 2/19
I like that the wolves have be approved of by Mum and Dad first. Nice touch.
mamdmc chapter 1 . 2/18
Interesting start. I'm intrigued.
Caliborn96 chapter 21 . 12/10/2013
Great Story!
guest chapter 21 . 10/17/2013
Thank u! Thank u 4 the great story n FOR KILLING RENEESME! YUR JUST 2 AWESOME!
darius prince of the sea chapter 21 . 4/22/2013
That was cute I'm gonna cry
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