Reviews for Behind Doors and Masks
whatifitwasdifferent chapter 13 . 7/3/2017
Yes, an update! This is an amazing story. You've done a great job making all the characters feel real. This is one of my favorites.
Shadow.SSJ chapter 13 . 6/30/2017
I'm glad you are back.) keep going! I missed your story.
Guest chapter 13 . 6/30/2017
Love your take on cannon
Guest chapter 13 . 6/30/2017
Great insights
kickthemoon chapter 13 . 6/29/2017
Wonderful to see the update - really enjoying this story. It's dark and brutal but really rings true (though I thought the Muggleborns weren't allowed back to Hogwarts at all that year?). Snape's characterisation is excellent and his fury and inability to control events around him come through clearly. Loved that moment when Neville feels for Snape living in a building full of enemies. Have to say that I really, really hope the ending doesn't try to stay canon...!
storm9449 chapter 13 . 6/29/2017
I was so excited when I saw the update. I love how I can feel the conflict building in this chapter. It's interesting that all of Slytherin is in good favor. That always seemed unrealistic to me, but with the environment they are in perhaps not. Nonetheless, I think the characterization in your work is amazing. Great chapter!
alix33 chapter 13 . 6/29/2017
One Malfoy, three odious Malfoys (and the incorrect apostrophe s just made them more odious than they already were, if that was at all possible).
I’m not sure whether reading about their planning during the rest of the trip to school makes me feel gleeful or absolutely distraught I’m so sad.
“rib cage” should be two words.
“Pure-bloods” should be hyphenated.
“Muggleborns” and “muggleborn” should be one word, alleges Google (where I looked both terms up yesterday evening while beta reading an update of a fic that I beta read for a Scottish Harry Potter fic author).
“freer rein”, not “freer reign”.
“had its own”, not “had it’s own”.
“its Head of House”, not “it’s Head of House”.
The character’s name is “Michael Corner”, not “Micheal Cornier”.
“stay in canon”, not “stay in cannon”.
Guest chapter 13 . 6/29/2017
I really hope Neville can tell the truth about this alliance after the war. And that Snape lives past that.
tigerlily124 chapter 13 . 6/29/2017
Well done! Things are definitely coming to a head. Wonder when the students will go into hiding? Thank you!
xxxLeanniexxx chapter 13 . 6/29/2017
Things are becoming darker all around!
Guest chapter 3 . 8/5/2016
It seems like Neville is too concerned about exams and homework. I mean he isn't there to learn, Neville was mainly staying at Hogwarts for the purpose of rebelling against the Carrows. I don't think he would care that much about his studies that year.
BakenandEggs chapter 12 . 8/2/2016
This story is amazing! But I find myself desperately hoping that it won't stick exactly to canon.

Please don't kill Snape!
Guest chapter 12 . 7/16/2016
I love it! The wait was totally worth.
tigerlily124 chapter 12 . 7/15/2016
Wow, he was in bad shape. I'm guessing he's had practice dealing withit alone though. Great chapter!
CharmedArtist chapter 12 . 7/9/2016
Wow, wow, wow. Another amazing chapter, and again I wish there were more. It feels like a weak review to say it was all perfect, but really, I wouldn't change a single thing about this chapter, or the story as a whole. Your characterization of both Neville and Snape is flawless and so grippingly real that reaching the end is a jolt every time. Really looking forward to more!
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